I was surprised to see another chapter to this, but quite pleased as well. As always, you've handled the characters with a deft hand and really did them justice. I particularly enjoyed both Hermione's questioning of her worth to Harry (emotionally and otherwise) and Harry's poignant response to her insecurity; it was quite touching and, to me, was even better than the smut (which was great).

Well done and thanks for sharing.

Awesome fic.
I had already read it on your livejournal though !
Keep writing !

The trouble with this sort of story is that they are somewhat repetitive, even if excellently written like this one. Al the sex i nice and great and everything, but it doesn't lead anywhere, does it. The events that are told could happen anywhere and anytime under whatever circumstance. Ys you are putting so much emphasis on the wilderness and the search for the horcruxes, all that should have some meaning, which, os far, it hasn't. So, somehow, it does look like a WIP, even if you don't think so, and actually screams to be continued.

guess what? SHE'S PREGNANT! I'd like to read about that, if you can become inspired again.

I absolutely love what you've done with this, and I'm so so happy that you were inspired to add another chapter to this story!
It was sexy and beautiful, and very well written, and I simply loved it!
Thanks for this!
-Michelle

This is by way your best story. It's almost perfect. Just too short. ;-)

Can't get tired from H/Hr. By the way, can't wait to read more of "A Most Advantageous Match." Keep writing.

So THIS is the first part. When I saw your posting on livejournal I was like: "part 2??? where the heck is part 1???" Good as always, keep writing.

Why are you so brilliant? I've yet to read a storie of yours that isn't great. I like where you left it, but if you choose to write more I will be more than happy to read it!

-Suzanne

Why are you so brilliant? I've yet to read a storie of yours that isn't great. I like where you left it, but if you choose to write more I will be more than happy to read it!

-Suzanne

That was really great ! Who knew Hermione could be a tease . Great job!

Wow! What a contrast to "Adventageous Match"! Your range is impressive. You are equally skilled in doing "hard" sex scenes as your "soft" ones. The more graphic language you use ("cock") would normally turn me off- in this instance, however, you use them sparingly and skillfully. You don't use more graphic words for the sake of communicating intensity with coarseness. That's something very interesting.

I'm going to look at more of your work! I feel that I will enjoy it just as much as I have the last two I read today.

I finished the pic manip I did for the story this morning and posted it here. Hopefully, html tags work for reviews, so that the link actually shows properly.

Probably not work safe.

Damn, that was hot. Loved the setting with the woods. I think you just inspired me to do some fanart to this.

I re-read this one again today for a nice dose of well written smuff.

Thanks!