Wow....just...wow....I can't believe I'm at a loss for words. One phrase kept popping into my head after reading this:

"Harry needs Hermione badly." Hmmm, now where have I heard that before?

I'd love to read how Ginny and Ron would react to this new dynamic/intimacy in HHr's relationship... here's hoping you'd get inspired!

That was AWESOME! It wasn't only about the sex (which was hot btw) it was also about the love and It was GREAT!

Quite the fic you have here. It was definitely steamy which I absolutely love. Also, it felt like you were accurate with the characters and their thoughts, well at least what I think they would be if Harry and Hermione were to be written in such a way... But I digress. In sum, I loved your fic, nicely done!

OMG That was so hot!

I love the comparison between the earlier couplings and the final one. I like that their emotional openness made the sex better.
Lovely piece.

I think the chapter showed us what your readers were hoping for. I mean at first it was like ok are they going to be ok. I think now i'm completly trusting this couple. I loved your a most advantageous Match. I don't know is there still more to that story. Keep Writing.

I was surprised to see another chapter to this, but quite pleased as well. As always, you've handled the characters with a deft hand and really did them justice. I particularly enjoyed both Hermione's questioning of her worth to Harry (emotionally and otherwise) and Harry's poignant response to her insecurity; it was quite touching and, to me, was even better than the smut (which was great).

Well done and thanks for sharing.

Awesome fic.
I had already read it on your livejournal though !
Keep writing !

The trouble with this sort of story is that they are somewhat repetitive, even if excellently written like this one. Al the sex i nice and great and everything, but it doesn't lead anywhere, does it. The events that are told could happen anywhere and anytime under whatever circumstance. Ys you are putting so much emphasis on the wilderness and the search for the horcruxes, all that should have some meaning, which, os far, it hasn't. So, somehow, it does look like a WIP, even if you don't think so, and actually screams to be continued.

guess what? SHE'S PREGNANT! I'd like to read about that, if you can become inspired again.

I absolutely love what you've done with this, and I'm so so happy that you were inspired to add another chapter to this story!
It was sexy and beautiful, and very well written, and I simply loved it!
Thanks for this!
-Michelle

This is by way your best story. It's almost perfect. Just too short. ;-)

Can't get tired from H/Hr. By the way, can't wait to read more of "A Most Advantageous Match." Keep writing.

So THIS is the first part. When I saw your posting on livejournal I was like: "part 2??? where the heck is part 1???" Good as always, keep writing.

Why are you so brilliant? I've yet to read a storie of yours that isn't great. I like where you left it, but if you choose to write more I will be more than happy to read it!

-Suzanne

Why are you so brilliant? I've yet to read a storie of yours that isn't great. I like where you left it, but if you choose to write more I will be more than happy to read it!

-Suzanne