I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

It is incredible, very hot, real and lovely sentences. Nice plot, nice imagination...
It made the story very real and very touching as well as very beatiful

-Finally, they are warm, and fed, and – relatively – safe, and she no longer needs her escape into fantasy. The reality, she finds, is much better.


very nice ending!
Daph

the broom thing was diff but other than that its well wrighten

that was even better then the last one !!!! WOW

The last chapter was perfect and this chapter is simply the essence of perfection itself. The way Harry and Hermione's relationship turns from rough and needy to 'I really do love you' is wonderful. Lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve it!!

I don't know what I want to do more, laugh at Hermiones antics and clever ways of seduction, or Aww and coo at the total love and adoration you crafted between them. The whole package of this chapter was perfect. The whole 'In The Woods' is brilliant and ofcourse, hermione and her shower talented-ness. wicked story, I can't wait to read the next chapter! LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVE this story!!! I noticed, by the way, that it ended yet you have another chapter. (You have no idea how happy I am about this *grin*) Nice.

May I say that this story is amazing. Beautifully written and well-balanced. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA Format) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!

Wow! What passion. The delivery was very effective.
Even words like "cock" and "clit" which can often-times be used incorrectly in a fic and end up sounding crude and crass sound with your writing aesthetic.
Yet ANOTHER great fic! Keep it up!!!

"This here is the wildest ride in the wilderness!!" to quote Big Thunder Mountain Railroad at Disneyland.

Wow....just...wow....I can't believe I'm at a loss for words. One phrase kept popping into my head after reading this:

"Harry needs Hermione badly." Hmmm, now where have I heard that before?

I'd love to read how Ginny and Ron would react to this new dynamic/intimacy in HHr's relationship... here's hoping you'd get inspired!

That was AWESOME! It wasn't only about the sex (which was hot btw) it was also about the love and It was GREAT!

Quite the fic you have here. It was definitely steamy which I absolutely love. Also, it felt like you were accurate with the characters and their thoughts, well at least what I think they would be if Harry and Hermione were to be written in such a way... But I digress. In sum, I loved your fic, nicely done!

OMG That was so hot!

I love the comparison between the earlier couplings and the final one. I like that their emotional openness made the sex better.
Lovely piece.

I think the chapter showed us what your readers were hoping for. I mean at first it was like ok are they going to be ok. I think now i'm completly trusting this couple. I loved your a most advantageous Match. I don't know is there still more to that story. Keep Writing.

I was surprised to see another chapter to this, but quite pleased as well. As always, you've handled the characters with a deft hand and really did them justice. I particularly enjoyed both Hermione's questioning of her worth to Harry (emotionally and otherwise) and Harry's poignant response to her insecurity; it was quite touching and, to me, was even better than the smut (which was great).

Well done and thanks for sharing.