Please, write more chapters... It's one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read... Please!!!

Liked the story, never get tired of reading it! cheers

Wow, not anymore chapters unless you get inspired again eh? Well I truly wish I was some great artist that I could draw you an image of this tale, alas I am not. This was seriously so good though, I'm drooling. It was delicious.

Holy Crap that was excellent beyond imagination, beyond my imagination maybe, clearly yours is above and beyond Amazing. I adored this.

I really love this story and i never get tired of rereading it. It is sad yet seems realistic to what they have to deal with it.

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

It is incredible, very hot, real and lovely sentences. Nice plot, nice imagination...
It made the story very real and very touching as well as very beatiful

-Finally, they are warm, and fed, and – relatively – safe, and she no longer needs her escape into fantasy. The reality, she finds, is much better.


very nice ending!
Daph

the broom thing was diff but other than that its well wrighten

that was even better then the last one !!!! WOW

The last chapter was perfect and this chapter is simply the essence of perfection itself. The way Harry and Hermione's relationship turns from rough and needy to 'I really do love you' is wonderful. Lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve it!!

I don't know what I want to do more, laugh at Hermiones antics and clever ways of seduction, or Aww and coo at the total love and adoration you crafted between them. The whole package of this chapter was perfect. The whole 'In The Woods' is brilliant and ofcourse, hermione and her shower talented-ness. wicked story, I can't wait to read the next chapter! LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVE this story!!! I noticed, by the way, that it ended yet you have another chapter. (You have no idea how happy I am about this *grin*) Nice.

May I say that this story is amazing. Beautifully written and well-balanced. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA Format) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!

Wow! What passion. The delivery was very effective.
Even words like "cock" and "clit" which can often-times be used incorrectly in a fic and end up sounding crude and crass sound with your writing aesthetic.
Yet ANOTHER great fic! Keep it up!!!

"This here is the wildest ride in the wilderness!!" to quote Big Thunder Mountain Railroad at Disneyland.

Wow....just...wow....I can't believe I'm at a loss for words. One phrase kept popping into my head after reading this:

"Harry needs Hermione badly." Hmmm, now where have I heard that before?

I'd love to read how Ginny and Ron would react to this new dynamic/intimacy in HHr's relationship... here's hoping you'd get inspired!