It was very nice to see an update to this story. Things seem to be moving along and I hope Harry and company are going to be able to deal with it.

This has been a very enjoyable story and I'm looking forward to readin more.

Thanks for sharing.

Can you check this fic status? It stated "Abandoned" when I was skimming through the New & Updated page.

Just a skirmish... What a neat idea! The Veela have intrigued me since the first time I read about them. I hope you have enough information about them to explain what it is that they do or are or radiate which has such a profound influence on us poor males.
Will Harry even be allowed to accompany Hermione to No Man's Land? Will he have to stay outside looking in?
More, please... Old Chuck

i see why a reviewer suggested to up the rating on this story, lots of crude humor and suggestive themes.

Like your story. Just found it again. I have to ask, though. What exactly is a "sob-cum-giggle"? Cheers.

wow, this is an awsome fic. write a lot more! how could anyone say anything bad abut this? you write just like J.K really you do!

Wow! Creativity fairly bubbles in your writing! What with warping the dimensions and exotic women, Hogwarts is getting up to date in a hurry. Maybe Minerva is right to worry about Enola.
The mechanism of hyperventilation, by the way is the reduction of partial pressure of carbon dioxide in the lungs, decreasing the acidity of the blood very slightly.
I'm hooked, tell me more... Old Chuck

STOP WITH THE HOLE HARRY/HERMIONE EVERYONE KNOWS SHES MENT FOR RON DUH BRANE

ok thnk god uve laid of harry hermione tht was horrid

ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok tht was okie but ihater HARRY/HERMIONE ITS GAY N UNREAL

OH NO WHAT ARE YOU DOING

ITS HARRY/GINNY
RON/HERMIONE YOU FOOL LOL

PLEEAASSSEEE :'( WAAAAAA IM CRYING

xoxnatalie-BIG hary potter fan

well i like hermione and harry sweet frendship but hermione is ment for ron i think its good you havnt over dun it with harry and hermione and made it look like they are jusy best friends as i read on i reaaaallly hope that it will be hermione and ron who get together but i really like they way you've kept the charactors as close to the original one as hermione dus act like harrys mother a lot of the time so a big well done and i cant wait to read the rest
xoxnatalie (BIG HARRY POTTER FAN)xox

This was a short chapter but I found it to still be very good. I can't wait for the next update!

This is a really good story. Confusing in a couple of parts, but really good none-the-less. I would like to see more heat between Harry & Hermione (go to http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/6612 to see what I mean by that..).

I also really liked the character development that you've done. If anything, that's the strongest part of the story. I'm not sure how the plot itself hangs together, but the characters (flaws and all) are really strong & I think you've done an amazing job with Hermione. You've got her nailed down very, very well. I also think that you 've done a nice job portraying Ron - with all of his weaknesses, etc. The character that I think you'd been less than kind to is Minerva McGonagall. She's kinder to Harry than you've let on.

Anyway - pls. keep writing!

hello there

that was a great chapter it explaned alot

FYI im gone from tommorow and then another 3 weeks so ill r&r when i get back