AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/06
the plots good, but you could have made this a bit longer and more detailed, but a gd story anyway!!  |
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aww that's so cute and sweet, too bad Hermione made a fool of herself, but it's good that everything worked out. I guess it's not that good of a story if it doesn't though, huh?
keep it up
-megz- |
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Yaaaay! Ah, I so wish Harry would never date Ginny. (Damn you, JK & Your HBP!)
LOL, I lunch you! Cute story, excellent ending. |
Author Feedback: Hehe, I couldn't agree any more! I despise Ginny (no offense to Ginny fans), she gets in the way of good ol' Harry and Hermione. Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it so much! |
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a man duhUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
that was such an awsome story. it was soooooooo totally romantic. ur an amazing writer plz continue writing fanfic. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I  getting reviews, and this made me so happy! I'll try to write more soon!
- Nicole ish Awesome |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/10/06
That was a cute little one shot. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! And I shall |
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Little quick and short but cute overall. I like the idea, those darn newspapers can cause problems, first time i ever saw them cause a solution. Well done. |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review! And yes, I know  |
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ha ha thats really cute. I loved it and I can't wait to read more of your upcoming stories!
*%* Susanna *%* |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much, and I'll try to get around to writing more stories soon! ;]
- Nicole |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/06
How funny " I lunch you!" I have to remember that one!  |
Author Feedback: Hehe, thank you! Thanks for the review :] |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/06
How funny " I lunch you!" I have to remember that one! |
Author Feedback: Hehe, thank you so much for the review!  |
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SebUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/06
Cute, nice and fluffy, though a tad fast. Maybe you couldv gone a little more into detail you know... But a god oone-shot in any case |
Author Feedback: Thank you, and I'm sorry it was fast =/ Thank you anyways!
- Nicole |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/06
*G* That was a catchy little fic. I hope we can see more from you soon.
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Thank you I hope I will get around to writing more soon.
- Nicole |
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this was extremly cute for a one-shot. i love it!! very very good for a first fan fic. i would've loved it to be a bit longer though personally. not just "oh paper" then to "kiss",but it was still good. ^^ CONGRATS! *squee* |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! And yes, I tried to make it a tad longer, but it kind of messed up =/ Thank you so much!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/06
awww.sweet. but kinda short. i remember reading a post-hbp fic where hermione goes into coma and "gets waken up by harry" but the story has like...3 plots in it despite being only one chapter....and yes...if im not wrong...it was like 10k word long.
you don't have to be as complex as that though. I can see that this is your first story but if you add more description...you know...angsty pov and such...this story would be far greater. It already holds alot of potential.
If someday when you decide to remake this story, you could show different people's pov,add more people,make it super angsty or write the humour properly(nothing funny about this fic)
i hope this review doesnt make you sad but instead montivate you to be the best author in portkey. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! And I'm not sad, thanks for the ideas! And yes, I know it's short =/ I love getting feedback though, so thank you very much! I may try and rewrite this story in the future, not sure though.
-Nicole |
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PANTUISigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/06
Hey:
That was cute, funny and really unique. I loved it. And welcome to the writers' world. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved it, it didn't take very long to make  Haha, thank you!
- Nicole |
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Hey, thanks for all of the reviews! I'm trying to figure out though, how do you give feedback on reviews? (Kinda slow sometimes xD) |
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