Very intriguing. It's kind of freaky, though. It's almost like they've been captured by dark wizards or something and are stuck in torture cells.... or something like that. Anway, I liked it.
Cheers, Moon

That was freaking amazing. Plays always seemed more interesting than just the stories, because you had to visualize and create the scene in your head instead of having it right out in front of you... That came from Lost? I stopped watching Lost in the middle of the first season. Oh well...

That was awesome and I look forward to reading your other stories!

Woah. The ending line freaked me out. lol.

Its a great fiction, but this is it?


Aw.. I wanted to see some action.

Anyways, great job!!

good!! thats cool!! i like it i love it!!! it is AWESOME!!!! i like your form of writing, i really want to know why they are in those cages, is it Voldy?? is it....... who knows???

Great job!!

Aww... I saw that episode of Lost and I love this! At first, I was a little thrown by the play-form, but I think it makes it better once you get used to it. And I love how Lily is so angry and... hostile (I guess that's the word) towards James, but then, she becomes so vulnerable and quiet near the end. It's sweet and endearing. I love it!

Lily's grudge seems kind of forced (Silly to even hold a grudge over something like that, much less hold it for seven years).

Are they in a giant Skinner Box?
Nice idea and excellently written. Keep them coming!

Aww I want to read more.... I can't wait to see what your other chapter updates are like from now on!

*%* Susanna *%*

(I've only seen the first season of Lost. I hope to catch up eventually!)
I always like to see things that are different, and I support anyone who tries something original. Good job!
I could really see this on a stage.
I'll have to check out your other stories!

I thought that was good. You haven't gotten many reviews on it but I don't see why. LOST is a spectacular show by the way. Great choice for inspiration. Keep up the good work.

=)

Interesting psychological piece, I especially enjoyed the writing style reflecting their surroundings, and the stacatto exchanges becoming more and more involved as James' comprehension dawned about the machine and his interactions with Lily. I feel that it could possibly have been explained slightly more extensively, and perhaps carried on, but it's a nice one-shot nonetheless. Enjoyed it, good job.

Wow. That was something. Talk about a dependency on dialoge. That was actually pretty good. It started off alright but it got better and better! I like how quick both characters are and how they really can just snap back at one another. It kind of freaked me out in the beginning because I thought they were a bit like Ron and Hermione. But then I remembered Ron doesn't really act like that. It's a bit more like Draco and Hermione. *sigh* My friend would love this fic...


Anyways, good job on this fic! It is, of course, incredible. I'm really glad you haven't stopped at the girl in the cafe and I hope to see you still alive in the very near future!

let me guess you are a fan of lost! love that show... hmm interesting cage scene! liked the dialogue keep writing