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Hana-xoxo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/08
Ahh! That was absolutely classic. I take my Harry statement back. Ron by far...his PoV is absolutely dead knock on HILARIOUS! I was laughing so hard I was crying! *shakes head* And you'll be pleased to know my alter ego was laughing so hard she had a coughing fit. Hold on let me check on her...
*AE you ok?*
*Yea-HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH-sorr-HAHAHA*
*yeah...oook..*
*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....*
*...*
Sorry about that she's a bit ood Anyways again this story was another masterpiece. It truly was entertaining and a absolutely joy to read. I thought it was a absolutely ingenious idea how you made Ron talk to the reader that was...just BLOODY BRILLIANT! Absolutely insane idea! And those lines my god they were absolutely out of this world! It's hilarious to see his PoV he's so frustrated. And that last word. The sheer brilliance and *ahem* eloquence blew me away 'OH. You think I'M melodramatic? You should see Hermione every time some cute thing with a hot arse and an agenda squiggles over to Harry and bats her overly false lashes at him. She goes positively ape-shit' Oh god oh god I think I nearly DIED here and the next line. ARE YOU GOING SOMEWHERE?! Oh my god. Honestly you're absolutely BRILLIANT. And I'm saying that honestly . You have really great talent in writing!

xoxo
Hana
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/06
Absolutley brillant you're the best writer I have read keep up the great work
 

HermioneIstheOne
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
that was absolutely hilarious! I don't know why I missed your stories until now. thank you for making me laugh.
 

bookworm1291
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/04/06
Hahaha! so funny! great story, will we ever find out when they realize it?
 

sannihun
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/05
Okay, this must be my favourite POV out of the three you have with this "plot". The way Ron sees everything and tries to make them notice each other’s feeling.... oh my god! it's spot on! How Hermione gives Ron "The Look" and poor Ron, he's just trying (and failing miserably) to help!!!

Love it!!!
 

godsowndevil
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/05
hahahaha... great story.. i was just looking out for old stories in portkey when i found this one.. its too good.. a typical POV by ron.. in can just imagine him sitting with harry and hermione and trying to get them to reveal their feelings to each other... and them getting mad at him for no fault of his... hahahaha... its tooo good... good job with this fic.. its wonderfull...
 

Silver Dragon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/11/04
LOL. That was great! And I can just see Ron venting and saying most, if not all, of what's in this!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/04
haha this was soooo funny, i LOVE Ron's point og view, yuo write it very well too
 

Vickles
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
I only look for a few things when reading a story, and two of them are that the characters are written correctly or the characters' personalities are essentially captured in the story line, and that it is enjoyable to read.
You did both, and do did it beautifully. Great Job!
 

ears91
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/04
that was great hilarious, gotta love ron excellent, a total blast!
 

Eternal_Magi
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/04
I have read many fics in my short time as a reader, and I have to say that you do a darn good job with the various POV's. This particular story was rather short, but funny to read. It may a little different from the Ron that we have come to know, but it is good to see Ron actually get an educated say in any matter. I have reviewed some of your other works as well and I will only say this (again) - keep it up and I'll keep reviewing.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/04
Nice, really it's quite unique in the story line and i believe i liked it a lot for that.

Sauron of Mordor
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/04
great chapter
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/04
great chapter
 

sanna
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/03/04
just great! really fynnu to read something from ron's pov once in awhile. doesn't happen too much. kepp writing, love your style!
 

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