that was AWESOME! i love and adore your james and the end was just perfect. hugs, pumpkin!

I turned on "Try To Hard" ny Teddy Geiger as i read this just for the effect (ok, and i was bored and just wanted something to do)
Oh, good story, it was funny, but i din't think Lily should have said yes (or ok.. you know what i mean..) the first time he tryed something differnt

aww. I can't wait to read more of this cute little story you got here!

*%* Susanna *%*

ROTFLMAO!!! Oh this was totally hilarious! I loved the interaction between the Maurader's & with Lilly there. *G* Keep up the great work!

Lisa

my review got cut off. here's what i was saying:


it's fantastic and wonderful and, oh, i'm sorry. (that's from the play i'm doing--cinderella). but really, (and it went on and on and on about how much i loveeedd your story)... i'd love you forever and ever if you updated it.

i promise.

xoxo tessa

mmhm. two pieces of advice for you:

1. up the rating
2. make another chapter!! (only i wouldn't mid if you kept the rating, i just needed at least two things to say. but really, update about like.... a date or something, since it's a great story and i lovelovelove it. it's fantastic and wonderful and.... oh, i'm sorry, (

Oh gods the laughter.... ohhhh the laughter...
Padfoot being called a sanitary napkin is just too much for my poor lungs to survive... I mean... I think one of them may have collapsed trying not to laugh...

Love it. James and his crazy antics to get Lily to go out with him are hysterical. Love Remus and Sirius in this one -LOL at the 'vow in tomato juice'. And the ending was lovely, with James finally being sincere with his words, and Lily finally agreeing. Really enjoyed this fic. Great job!

~Cat

Woohoo Go James! V.funny! and also *snort* V.CHEESY! Loved it! Remus has a contract? The whole hip-thrusting extravaganza was hysterical! Love the way you`ve portrayed James! Cringeworthy!

This is really good. Love it. I tried to sign in, but for some reason I can't so this is Anonymous. I usually sign in with loonymoony8, but it's not working. Great job writing this! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

That was very cute, and adorably fluffy, but I loved it all the same. Keep up the great work.

that was really really good. you should make some more one shots daily or weekly or something cause this story it reall really really really good. ( did i say really really really really really really really really really really really really really good yet?)

but ya, i cant wait for the next one.