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Non Sequitur

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jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/10/06
ohh these was so cute i must say i want to live with my own harry and hell get a really good job not the one that i go any who i´ll stop biching about my life and must asy that i really loved it it all seams really like harry and hermione and hell please let it be like that
Author Feedback: Heh, work sucks eh? But still, the pub is a magical place where things like this can happen. Glad you liked it Cheers for reviewing my dear!
 

Jill
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/10/06
Hi Thanks for that, I really enjoyed it, liked the fact that I could recognise all the normal things in a pub, the Grouse, fullers etc. It felt dead cosy that boozer!

Loced the flrting, always the best bit.

Thanks again
Author Feedback: Yeah, it did seem like a right proper boozer when I wrote it. Made me fancy a pint of London Pride myself

Glad you liked it And glad I got the details all good and kosher, cheers for reviewing!
 

starromance14
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/10/06
Another adorable chapter.
I think I liked the ending the best where they just kind of walked home no corny kiss or anything but if you were to go on I'm sure there would be one pretty soon.

Great job.
Author Feedback: Heh, er, there was a kiss dude. It was pretty much the climax of the story
 

starromance14
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/06
ooo I really enjoyed this.
Sometimes I really just need a bit of fluff to get my though the day.
V. Cute!
Author Feedback: Thanks, glad you liked it
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/10/06
That was exciting. I really liked that story. Very cute. I loved the way you described things. Lovely and wonderful.

Great intereaction between Luna and Ron and between all of the Trio.

Lovely.
Author Feedback: Thanks Again, really pleased you liked it
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/10/06
That was a great story so far. I really like the way you write. It's so detailed and much more complex than stuff that I have read over at ff.net. Lovely and stupdendous job.
Author Feedback: Thanks! And I dunno, there's some awesome authors over at FF.net that I can only hope to approach

Glad you enjoyed the story, cheers for reviewing!
 

MononWalker
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/10/06
Very nice. Yes, it was just a little bit of fluff, but it was a nice little bit of fluff.

I like how through the whole thing Harry - while still being rather clueless - kept up the inner monologue, getting little hints from himself (and Hermione) while still existing in a state of Denial.

And the end just coming all together was just ... I don't know, nice is too simple a word but is fitting.

Thanks for sharing this and now I'll have to start reading your other stories, too.
Author Feedback: Thanks And yeah, Harry's just nervous, bless him. A few pints of the black stuff and he gets the fabled Alcohol!Courage. Well, enough to let him self be ki...yeah, I guess he didn't do much at all really, did he?

Glad you anjoyed it and thanks for reviewing...and for checking my other stories out
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/10/06
I liked it! And mmm Harry in a little blue navy coat.
Author Feedback: A long blue navy coat

Glad you enjoyed it.
 

katediggory
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/10/06
i really love this two-shot - just the perfect level of banter and flirting. keep up the good work with your other fics
Author Feedback: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll try my best

Cheers for reviewing.
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/10/06
Ah loved this little tale and their job and such. The bar and Ron's reaction to the joint account were priceless. Loved the kiss, WOW. And Harry with his boredom of training and paperwork was right on the money.
Author Feedback: Thanks Anne, pleased you liked it I thought the kiss was pretty cool too...if only someone would do that to *me* dammit!

Cheers for reviewing
 

fierydragon89
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/10/06
WOOOOW!!!!! Dude, it's great. i have such a fun time reading this story (even though, i suppose to do my homework). Love everything about this story. i love the Procrastinate harry by the way (kinda like me ). can't wait till ur next story.
Author Feedback: Thank you And you don't have to wait long, it's already up! Check out Ties of Blood And Water

Glad you enjoyed Non Sequitur, anyway. It was immensely fun to write
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/10/06
This was a great story! You definitely need to write more!
Author Feedback: Heh, thank you Pleased you enjoyed it so much, cheers for reviewing, and for the support!
 

hermione4harry
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/10/06
That was great! You have a brilliant and easy to read writing style. It took them long enough after being flatmates to kiss. lol
Author Feedback: Did take them a while, didn't it?

Glad you enjoyed it, feel free to check out my other stuff if you enjoyed Non Sequitur
 

lorien829
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/10/06
Liked "Ties" so much that I decided to see what else you had, and found that I'd missed this one while I was gone.

Very nice fluff -- in fact, I wouldn't have minded seeing it go on as they began their relationship.

I really like your writing style. Very descriptive and well done!
Author Feedback: Yeah, I'm still deciding on whether or not to add a third chapter. Possibly at the end of the week, depending on how well I press ahead with "Ties".

Thank you for your kind words, and for reviewing! I'm really pleased you liked it
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/10/06
Great story, absolutely loved it, hope to read more soon.
Author Feedback: Thank you, thank you Feel free to check out my latest!

Cheers for reviewing.
 

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