This was a really cute story. It was a little hard to follow the POV, was it Harry the entire time? Another thing, I would have given Harry a couple of siblings. I don't think that Lily and James would have stopped with just him, but that's my opinion. Great job!

Hrm... how to go about praising this chapter without sounding like a blitoring-idiot, drooling fan-boy... I'm not sure I can.

It's a shame a series of 7 books writen about *that* Harry probably wouldn't work nearly as well as the Harry JKR gave us. I really enjoyed about Harry being HAPPY for once.

Thanks you, and keep up all the good work!

I read this before, and I really enjoy coming back to it. It is the way things should have been. A happy Harry with wonderful parents! Great Story.

That was a very lovely one-shot. I especially liked the fact that James and Lilly were still alive and they were all at Godricks Hollow. Nice twist. I especially enjoyed that all the characters were still all friends.

Wow...what a great story. It's nice to see what could have been...and he totally would end-up with Hermione. JK's just echoing her own insecureties. Twat! How could she put Harry with the psycho fan-girl?! Who looks like
HIS MOTHER?! Paging Dr. Freud...we've got a few patients for you. Anyway, I love this fic, and I hope you continue it, more chapters please.

That was really good. I liked naration from harry and stuff. nice job!

oh my god, this nearly made me cry...
you're right, this is what Harry deserved, what any teenager deserves. it just contrasts with what he has so much it makes his life all the worse...
great job! if I had to change one thing, I'd work on making your writing a bit smoother, but other than that, keep up the good work!

So what's wrong with living happily ever after? I like the optomistic approach to Harry and Hermione's alternate life; one could almost call it Harmonious.
So it is written, so mote it be.

Is there going to be more of this?
Because quite honestly I'm really liking it and I can't wait to read more...
Please update soon...

~JL

It was good. I liked it. Very enjoyable read. Bravo Bravo!

Verry sweet but it would be har to write 7 cannon books if things happened like that. But you did it well thanks for writting.

Well, that was quite bittersweet. It's lovely to see a fic like that with Harry all happy, but horribly depressing to be coem back to the reality that that isn't what is happening. It definitely hsould've been that way, unfortunately, DUmbledore, Sirius and his parents are dead.

Great job on this fic though.

ohmygod,ohmygod! That was soooo cute!! You have to continue!! You HAVE to! I love stories in which Lily and James are alive. It truly is the way things should have been.

Really Great. I would love to read more with Harry having such a happy family life. I just can't stand the Dursleys. Hopefully you will continue on to adventures as Head Boy and Head Girl and Christmas with Mom and Dad.

this story seems a bit dark although i definitely aggree wiht what you have put in it
at first i was confused but then i realised that lily and james were alive and i also believe that this was a very euphoric and pefect world. a utopia of sorts of course!