I thought this was a good thing. I am waiting for you to get finished with Soul-Pieces so I can read that. *G* & being a novel-length author is not a bad thing...I personally think its a very very good thing.

Lisa

that was great it was kinda funny to no offence

hey awesome ficcy... enjoyed reading it... i have to say... it was fast paced... I guess it's the lengthy type of writing suppressed I suppose... good job!!!!

god you have to continue it!! i will hate u if you dont!!

OOH! This was soooooo GOOD! I had a smile on my face during all the flashbacks and the very end! I just couldn't get it off....

oh my god! I must know this is another piece of your,this is very good fic make more sense and realistic oh! i like all of your works,they are great

This story is amazing! I really like how you incorporated flashbacks into the story. It's like a frame story, meaning a story within a story. Great use of literary aspects!!!

Good one shot here. I really liked it. The pacing was good and the whole thing mirrored a real relationship with its ups and downs. Well done.

Sigh. Now *that* was beautiful. & Yes, Hermione did what she should have done. If Harry wasn't paying any attention to his family & devoting all his time to work, she should have left.

Lisa

that was a very good little one shot. I really enjoyed it. And the ending was very sweet. Keep up the good work.

ohh... i love it.. your h/hr fics never cease to amaze me

i was so sad... thought she had left him for good. thank god she didnt. greta fic. maybe a sequel? or something along these libnes? grweat job lemmon

OMG!
You made me cry!
I'm not kidding, at all.. I'm crying, this was so sad, and sweet, and so romantic..
(I don't usually cry in fics..)
-“I'm trying Hermione. Please...give me another chance.” He was crying. “Please, come back. We can be happy again. I-I can't sleep...I can't eat...I can't live without you by my side.”-
Tha line killed me, really.. seeing a desperate Harry is hard to me, I love him too damn much.. Well.. in Soul Pieces he'll have to apologize a lot before I totally forgive him.. So.. Update soon! On your three stories, I'm waiting them.. all of them.. ^^
See ya!

What a realistic one-shot, fics like this one are hard to find but it's a pleasure when you read one because it has that realistic side that you don't see often on fanfiction. It was a bit angsty but really good

awwwwww sad but it ended perfectly good job i loved it i felt bad for hermione but harry made up for it good job