LOGIN PANEL :

Displaying Reviews for
Cold Feet

Total Reviews: 58

View chapters for a specific chapter:

<< prev
jump   | next >>
Fairycat
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/06
Wonderful story. I am sure Harry and Hermione will be able to handle anything messy that comes there way.
 

h/hr4ever
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/06
very very cute. I absolutely loved it!!! Good job, can't wait to read more stories form you.
 

brad
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
This was great! Written very nicely. It's a cliched sort of event - "Harry's discover's that it's really Hermione whom he really loves" - but I reckon this is one of the best implementations I've read. Thanks!
Author Feedback: Thanks very much. I'm totally with you on the cliche thing, butlet's face it - H/Hr 'fanon' is pretty much just different variations of "Harry finally realises that it's Hermione he loves!", lol! *g* I wrote this for a few friends from some fic prompts on my Livejounal, and they wanted some post HBP 'Harry finally wises up' action, so this is what came out. I'm glad you liked it.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
I love your fics! And I can't ait for you to update The Sound of a Kiss!
 

azi
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
Oh what a great one-shot , Harry getting cold feet it's always so good!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
Too bad for Ginny, but oh well. I think most feel this is the way it should be. Or at least I do.
 

Diana Black
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
Nice! Awesome! I so didn't want it to end!

I loved how Harry realised while buying a ring for Ginny, that he really didn't want to marry her at all, and that maybe he had been doing what people were expecting of him, and not what he really wanted for himself. I love that Harry goes for who he wants and he's willing to take the consequences but he doesn't want those consequences to affect either Hermione or Ginny. Very cool of him!

Great story. If you decided to write a little sequel or epilogue, that wouldn't be amiss. Somehow, I think that Harry would pick out the perfect ring for Hermione...
 

telmie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
Please. the. next. chapter, please?

absolute wonderful, very well written, it seems to me a piece of a great story that will develop.

congratulations,

telma.
 

starofrock21
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
awwwwwwwwwwwww this story was cute lol i think u should do a sequal were harry gets her a ring and he goes the the store to get one and does something really cute becuase hes the perfect boyfriend and now im just rambling on and on andon and on lol ok im done OMG HOUSE IS ONE GOOD STORY BYE !!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
That was lovely, absolutely lovely! I loved Harry's realisation in the shop, and I agree with what you said about Harry's relationship with Ginny - that he would marry her purely because he was swept into it by the Weasleys. I would absolutely love to read more from this universe. Great story!
 

Amdorn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
Brilliant story.

I loved every word. It was real. I can see Harry asking Hermione for help and then coming to a grand realization. I can also see Hermione's "knowing" reaction.

Very beautifully written.

Thanks
 

MaDeLaiNe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
What an absolutely wonderful scene. I could FEEL every one of Harry's thoughts and feelings... And this must be the first fic I've read that everything happens in a heartbeat and yet it seems so right and nothing rushed.

The dialogue is wonderful too. Thanks a lot for sharing this, Genevieve!
 

Bingblot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
*sighs* Oh so beautiful and so perfect!
I love Harry's revelation; it was perfectly handled and seems so very appropriate.
I love the kiss, love the confession, love how Hermione reacted.
Messy, yes, it definitely is. But it's also right.

*fangirls* I don't know how you express everything so beautifully but I love it!

I do hope there's more of this!! A sequel, perhaps, where we get to see how the messiness is resolved?... Please...
 

ginger25
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
oh my god that was so good! I know this was supposed to be a one-shot but have you thought about continuing it? I really hope you do! I want to find out what happens after Harry and Hermione spill the beans :-)
 

acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/06
I think this was a really well-written one-shot.

If only we could get a longer version!


To see all the messiness that ensues because of Harry's willingness to break out with news like this!

But I just loved the details, the way you wrote how they looked at each other, the way you described Harry's cluelessness as to what was happening in the beginning for him being so suddenly aware of Hermione in such a different aspect.

You have all the qualities in here for a WONDERFUL one-shot!

Please, write more soon!

I loved reading this, the details were immaculate, the awkwardness and the spot on description of the characters we love so much has really shined through! Keep up the good work.

Melissa
acoustics1220
 

<< prev
jump   | next >>
 

Page generated in 0.01004 seconds. 198 users currently online.
Server running: Portkey Version 2, coded by James & Skinned by Imran(NAPPA).