HAHA brillianti hate the idea of harry and ginny so that is perfect way for them to break up, lookin at rings for the bratty lil princess. |
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Chachet1Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/11/06
Lovely! Really sweet and lovely! Just how I like my H/Hr!!! Recced by Victoria tonks, so I came to see!
Dear god, I wonder what Ginny will say????
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Victoria Tonks recced this and I think it's simply beautiful with Harry's change of mind and his attitude is very in character and very Gryffindor-like. Impetuous.
I like that he acknowledges that it won't be easy. But asking Ginny was easy. Things have been "easy" for far too long. |
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Thats cute. I loved this little one-shot and I can't wait to be able to read more of your stories!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/10/06
I would hope it doesn't take Harry that long to catch a clue, or for Hermione to grow a spine and fight for the man she loves. However, within the plot as written, nicely done. Now I'm going to look up some of your other work. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/10/06
Hear, hear! This is speaking from the POV of a longtime H/G + Hr/R fan who defected to the H/Hr camp. Not that I'm sure even Harry is good enough for Hermione - of all the canon characters I've seen, only Remus might be good enough for her. |
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papertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/06
Yeah! you're back to fanfic!!!
Awww... I loved Rain King ("I got your leg!, indeed), and that line from Scully-in-the-ladies-room was perfect  :sigh: Mulder and Scully were my first "meant-to-be" pairs who were seen as platonic friends by others ... till the end
I liked how H/Hr both could read each other so well ...especially that he picked up on what she was :not: saying. Good to see him so sure of what he wanted and willing to go through the whole public eye thing with her... That ending was perfect.
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papertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/06
Yeah! you're back to fanfic!!!
Awww... I loved Rain King ("I got your leg!, indeed), and that line from Scully-in-the-ladies-room was perfect  :sigh: Mulder and Scully were my first "meant-to-be" pairs who were seen as platonic friends by others ... till the end
I liked how H/Hr both could read each other so well ...especially that he picked up on what she was :not: saying. Good to see him so sure of what he wanted and willing to go through the whole public eye thing with her... |
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papertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/06
Yeah! you're back to fanfic!!!
Awww... I loved Rain King ("I got your leg!, indeed), and that line from Scully-in-the-ladies-room was perfect  :sigh: Mulder and Scully were my first "meant-to-be" pairs who were seen as platonic friends by others ... till the end
I liked how H/Hr both could read each other so well ...especially that he picked up on what she was :not: saying. Good to see him so sure of what he wanted and willing to go through the whole public eye thing with her... That ending was perfect.
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cute little story. really nice. it got the pt across. nice work! |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/06
WHOO HOO! HMS Pumpkin Pie rules! This was so very sweet and so very good. I loved every syllable! Brava! |
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"But you saved me. As difficult and frustrating as it's been sometimes, your God-damned strict rationalism and science have saved me a thousand times over. You kept me honest. You made me a whole person. I owe you everything, and you owe me nothing. I don't know if I want to do this alone. I don't even know if I can..." That could so easily be said by harry  Very nice little fic. I thought Hermione's reaction to the situation was very well written, I can just see her face. |
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lemon5225Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/06
wow. this was quite wonderful. i loved the way you combined the different confusing emotions and made it seem so real. i could totally relate to all the emotions and confusion that harry was feeling. great story. will there be more...? please? |
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I really enjoyed this, and I think you should definitely continue it. It would be an angsty, but enjoyable, piece. Is there any chance you'll add more to it? |
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Wonderful little story, almost completely perfect. And I only say "almost" because of some minor shifts in tense, but that's okay. I love this story as it is anyway.
Cold feet, pshaw, he was just waking up. |
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