atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/04/07
Thats the way it should be you know.  Just some good ol' bonding between 2 people who have an absolutely strong one. Nicely written. It fits perfectly. |
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MiaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/04/07
You really are a very lovely writer! I myself have imagined a scene similar to this taking place between the two of them, usually in front of a fire no less  where the two of them just talk quite casually despite all the gloom around them. This was beautifully written and written in a way that it is entirely believeable. I love it! ~Mia |
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I LOVED it. Quietness, completness, unity. Them being so very much themselves despite what they've been through. The way you hinted at how the war changed them. Their mutual understanding. Sharing. Opening up to each other. Telling things they never thought they'd tell anyone.
I know it's a completed story but I'd love to see a sequel to this. Even though I loved it that you left it just at that. Sitting together, talking. So usual, and so beautiful.
Beautiful. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, thank you, thank you! |
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very good i really liked it....but you made a grammaticl error...its " ron and me". that is the correct way of saying it. |
Author Feedback:  You're right! Well....I'll get around to fixing it eventually! Thanks for pointing it out! |
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That was exquisite. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it was very touching. I always felt like HP neglected Hermione's past and took her for granted in not getting to know her better.
Hope to see a follow up to this! |
Author Feedback: I feel the same way about Hermione's past--I guess JKR wanted to keep the Grangers deliberately out of the story since there's so much on the Weasleys. Ooh, I would love to do a follow-up of this, but I'm planning on tayloring this ficlet to fit in my other fic "Powers of Persuasion." WHen I get around to updating, that is. THanks so much for reading! |
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That was amazing, I mean I absolutly loved it. It was perfect I mean just perfect you hit those characters down pact. I loved how they barely touched just stared and I loved how you would talk about them just being close to eachother, it was awesome. Loved every bit of it.
That twin part was amazing I will have to check that book out I love reading new things. But anyway's I'll stop babbling very good job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you seemed to have enjoyed this little ficlet as much as I enjoyed writing it. The book is called "The Thirteenth Tale" by Diane Setterfield. SO good! THanks for reading! |
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That was a great little chapter you have there. I hope that the story is continued and if not I can't wait to read your new stories and then the updates of your older ones!
*%* Susanna *%* |
Author Feedback: Thanks! This fic actually belongs in my other fic Powers of Persuasion, but I thought it could stand on its own here, so I gave it the opportunity! Thanks so much for reading! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/06
i love the direction of this story!  i really hope you continue and update very soon!!! |
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"But I do know that they gave me my best friend and that I, at least, am proud of him.”
That, is quite possibly, one of the greatest quotes I've ever read in fanfiction, so fluffy, so buoyant, so true! The overall story wasn't as romantic as I had hoped, but it was a very nice fic!
Katie |
Author Feedback: Thanks, Katie!  That line sort of inspired the whole little ficlet. Romance KILLS me, I can't write it. Thanks for reading though, even if it wasn't what you hoped! And of course thanks for reviewing! |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/06
Good one here. Iliked the "best friends forever" feel. I for onelove the "in front of the fireplace" fics. They seem so much more 'them'. Great fic. Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: I have a tendency to write "in front of the fireplace" fics anyway. I think it's because it's the perfect atmosphere for conversation. Thanks so much for reading! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/06
I love this one-shot it's so, anti-climatically wonderful I just can't stand it. |
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well i think it was amazingly well written lol i love it  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
Get interplay between Hermione and Harry.
I enjoyed every minute, word of this fic.
In everyone's life conversations like this happen all the time. But very few writers are able to convey both the multi-layered conversation and the intense feelings captured within a single conversation. Congratulations.
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Author Feedback: Thanks very much!  I think in most cases, it's the everyday, mundane things that are most interesting anyway, because everyone can relate to those! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a kind review! |
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tank03Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
Great little fic. I love the way you write the interaction between Harry and Hermione. You've got a knack for writing meaningful conversations between those two, but it never bogs down the narrative; everything flows nicely.
As good as this was, I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter. Just a thought.
Great fic, thanks for sharing! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I only wish I was as sophisticated in the art of meaningful conversation in real life! But I kill at small talk...lol. Why, what a lovely suggestion--did I mention that this ficlet is actually going to be a little flashbacky-do in the next chapter of "Powers of Persuasion"? So, that's a preview I guess, hehe. Thanks for reading yet another one of my drabbles, lol! |
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This was sweet. I enjoyed how totally comfortable they are with each other, how they can tell each other anything, even their deepest secrets. No matter what Hermione eventually does in book 7, I believe Harry will always be her closet friend and confidant. Thanks for sharing. I should probably check out the rest of this story  |
Author Feedback: lol I love your screen name. I agree with your outlook on Book 7. And we still have our ficdom, so even if Hermione goes another way, we're not completely lost! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review--yeah, if you wanted to check out the rest of PoP, I wouldn't be opposed to that, lol. |
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