My comment, as soon as i finished it was, "that was perfect," i even had a tear crawl down my cheek, wonderfully written, if i found any common errors, this would be a 'rounded' critique, but nothing is wrong, unless its like a word thats says had when you meant bad, so awesome job, LOVED IT, check me out on fanfiction.net... my alias is charlee toombs, story's title, is worldview, its a work in progress...

could i offer you some constructive criticism?
check over the story closely and try to criticise your own work eg. \'is this really believable?\' \'have i said this before?\'
do you have a beta reader? if you don\'t look into getting one because an outside eye can pick up mistakes better than the author. little mistakes might not worry some people, but others get really frustrated and it makes it hard to enjoy reading the text.
as well as this, the story seems a little bit repetitive and out of character at some points, check for consistency but you don\'t want to over-do things.
this is just a few tips, i liked the plot ideas in the story, they were new and exciting, and please don\'t take this the wrong way - i mean no offense.
good luck with future stories

ooo I am so excited to have found this fic!
i love fics that include most of the Portkey's ship! HHr DG RLL you have no idea how excited I am and i checked ur profile before reading and realize that all ur stories have the same ships!!!!mmmm i wanna say poor ginny for having to turn into pansy just to help her friends but i have black and kind of a round face (im asian so i guess im built that way)lol oooo i am so excited!!! well im on to the next chapter!!!!!!!

i know i've already reviewed but i forgot to say in my other review that i really like the way you've put song titles as all chapters in your fics! that's really cool and i know like almost all the songs you've put
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i went on portkey tonight trying to find a really good, realistically-written D/G fic. and i found it (=
you're a really good writer!!
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gahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
loovveeeddddd ittttt!
loved how draco seemed like such a prick.
im ssooooooo happy you ended it with them together i dnt kno y but alot of d/g writers have them not ending up together in the end, and that deeply saddens me.
looovvve this pairing amazing job =]

ahh loved it haha it was absolutely great omg can't wait to read more haha!! keep writing amazing stories like this!

woot!! great story...when does draco find out that ginny was actually pansy...hopefully soon because i can't wait to see how he reacts!

haha excellent decision to make the story R haha i really like this story and i\'m only on the third chapter well keep writing!

Love this chapter. He kisses her as Ginny! Nothing gets better than that!

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Mainly because I want to see what Draco's reaction is. I can't believe the necklace fell out! How dramatic! Okay i'm rambling, so I'm going to shut up now!

Yea! Ginny's back...I was waiting so desperately for that to happen. I like Ginny more than Pansy. She deserves Draco more than Pansy. Be gone Pansy, you're annoying! Good chapter, really loved the part where Pansy sort of leaves Draco.

NO! PANSY IS BACK! She scares me, i must admit, something about her...just scary

What is it? What is it? I can't wait to see what it is!

Uh-oh. Is he going to figure out that she's not Pansy? Will he care? I guess I have to read the next chapter to find that out.