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hahahah weird idea, that was... never would imagine that, I mean, they hiding a romance in Hogwarts... why wouldn't it be in the book.... funny the idea... |
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Potter_FanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/11/06
Awww that was lovely...Its rare to find a fanfic so well written-especially one of this rating, usually its just self gratifying smut. You, however, manage to successfully set the scene with that beautiful imagery and incorporate the love between the two characters. This is what Harmony should be!!!!! |
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That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. It's so sad how they have to have 'stolen moments' in order to be together until the war is over, and how they're both worried about Ron's reaction to their relationship. That was great. Good Job =)
 vickyyy* |
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Wow... That was so beautiful! I loved that story so much! It was breathtaking... they love each other so much!
I absolutely love the way that the story didn't drag on too long, while, at the same, expressing everything it needed to, as well as an overwhelming amount of love and emotion!
You're are truly a wonderful writer!
I hope to see more of your work soon!
-Michelle |
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GraceUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/10/06
Oh my God, that was so beautiful  .
So romantic and not k inky.
I love it.
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It is a really good one shot and really well written. |
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CrysUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
That was just beautiful, hun! The imagery so so captivating from line one that I practically drowned in the feel of this story. I always end up getting lost in your writing anyway, so no surprises! Great job!
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/06
How sweet. Her love will save both of them in the end. Harry is such a gentle soul. |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/06
Oh, that was sweet! It is too bad they can't be out in the open like other couples. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/06
Very sweet! I could see that being a scene out of their life until Voldemort is gone. They were so tender with each other. Lovely fic. They are so right together! |
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 How CUTE!! I could just feel the surroundings and the water, and *sigh* it was amazing! Brilliant work!!!! |
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mannequinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/06
Aw that was sweet! I enjoyed reading that, and I'm glad you posted it. I'm assuming this is a one shot? Otherwise I think it'd be interesting to see how everyone reacts to them as a couple, if they're ever able to come out of hiding. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/06
That was really great. I loved it. Nice job. That's too terrible that they had to do it in hiding and that they were stolen moments. Nice title by the way. Great job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/06
This is an excellent piece of work. Great small piece of erotica. Love it. |
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