My first thought is, "Thank God you don't write this kind of angsty Ten/Rose fic." Because. Yeah. This story killed me inside.


The unresolvedness and the angst and - oh! D: Still magnificently written, as usual, though.

I'm officially crying!!!
Any chance you will write a second chapter or a sequel..follow up?

Wonderful little story... I hope this first chapter isn't the end of it. This plot has a lot of potential. But it does stand strong on it's own, if it has to.

Is he ever going to wake up? this is very sad... and I love th N/G couple! It was short, but I liked it... hope to read something new from you...

la la la la la la la la la la la wake up Harry!

that was lovely! i want more! i love how hermionie was so loyal and everything *tear*

i love her loyalty, and how she will never give up on him even when everyone else does

That was lovely. It wasn't a one shot, was it? I want more. I'm greedy.

another angst masterpiece!
Will there be a happy ending? I know with your stories most dont have happy endings...but still...

Buuuaaawww...it is all sooo sad!

Wonderfully written angst. The switches between the past and the present were well done and the emotion dripped off the screen. I just wanted to give Hermione a hug, putting her life on hold for him like that. That last line was heartwrenching. Who am I kidding? The whole story was heartwrenching. Beautiful. This story is the perfect example of why I'm such a sucker for angst.

*sighs*
Oh, how can you stop writing H/Hr when you do it so well?!!! The poignance and the power of your writing never fails to move me-- and I can't bear to think of losing your brilliant touch in always keeping the Trio so in-character!!! Please, don't stop writing H/Hr!!!! We need you!!

Sniffle. That was beautiful. & I liked the way Hermione went back after Ron. You do realize that people are going to want him to wake up right? *G*

Lisa

OMG!!!! i can't stand these story. Hermione left hanging and harry in a coma. i hope u would make some more chapters for this story. but i like it when you make Ron look bad. that was exellent

WAKE UP!!!!
okay you must do a follow up.
i won't take no for an answer.

Since portkey has a minimum limit to the size of reviews... I'll use this space to explain why I think that particular policy stinks.

You see, your story... it can be described in a single word. The fact that I'm forced to use more than one word is annoying and childish on the part of the people running portkey.org.

So... now you know. Oh and as to your story? Take your pick from the words below.

depressing.
short
unresolved
petty
dumb
inconclusive
downer
saddening
miniscule
unfinished