That was an interesting read. I was amazed at how you managed to keep who "I" was a secret till the end. I know this is portkey and all...but the Angst/Romance rating (With Angst in front) threw me off a little so I was always wondering who the "I" was.

Either way, a real nice read (Probably because I don't like Ron that much as a character =x) once I was sure that the "I" was Ron. =P

Great writing! Loved it.

Even though this is a H/Hr area, I thought it was Ron she was marrying.
I was waiting and waiting for something to change, for it to all go downhill and then she would leave Ron for Harry. Lol.. Like it how it always happens.
When it got to the end, after the wedding I was so confused.
"WHAT! THE! HELL!" type of deal, lol.

Then the ending sentence... bloody brilliant!

I loved this story. I really enjoyed how you kept us guessing. I knew that you had to be writing from Ron's point of view b/c this portkey. But you gave us characterizations of both Ron and Harry to keep up the suspense. Poor Ron hopefully he will get over it

I thought this was amazing! I loved how you builded up the tension and then you finally told who Hermione got married to and the narrator. I think I might have to read it again, now knowing who she marries (: I thought it was Harry and I was thinking "No! She can't marry Ron!" But you suprised me =) I love it!

I really liked the way the story started out but u shouldnt have made it a one shot. ur would be an really excelent writer if you just finished ur stories.

I liked it. It wasn't great but it was a good little one-shot for when you don't want to read too much. By the way i had it figured out by, 'Everyone always talked about how jealous he was of me, of what I had, and yet, there I was, green with envy every time they were together'. Ron is always jealous of what Harry has even though Ron has nothing to complain about. Well done on a good story!

I figured it was Ron in the beginning, what with the sourness and jealousy. And the midnight snack helped too. But the wandless magic? No, that is OOC. Ron couldnt do wandless magic to save his life. Well written, great emotion, he needs to get over it.

It's an interesting story.
So much unlike the others you find out there.
Both Harry and Hermione are a bit out of character.. but I think you did Ron well..

Ha! that was brilliantly written.You had me jumping between Harry and Ron the whole time . iT WAS ALL I COULD DO TO NOT JUST SKIP TO THE END WHEN I WAS HALF WAY THROUGH.LOL!!i loved the way you added both aspects of Harry and Ron(they actually are quite similar those two, in terms of their positive and negative character traits, guess that's why they are such good mates).Great Job!!!!!!!!!

Really heart wrenching. So, so sad...I feel bad for Ron, but not bad enough I wish it was him though Still, unrequited love is the very worst, huh?

This was a lovely, tragic, beautiful one-shot. So emotional...thank you for sharing

PHEW! You have no idea how many times i changed my name through-out this fic! At first i was sure the narrator was Ron, then i thought it was Harry, then back to Ron, then Harry, and when i'd FINALLY decided for sure that it was Harry (and was getting angrier by the minute), you made the last word 'Potter' and i didn't want to punch the computer screen anymore! So, it takes an amazing author to write a piece like this. You have SO got what it takes. Kepp it up!

~LK1512~

OMGG that WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFULL!!!!! FANTASTIC JOB! the whole time i thought it was Harry narrating, and then at that last sentence it was clear that it was Ron instead!!! oh i just LOVED it!!! great job!

Wow what a shocking ending! And here I was feeling sorry for Harry the whole entire time! Great story!

That was awesome. Just amazing, you wrote the characters so well! I'll admit, I thought it was Ron as the narrator all along, but there were moments when I wasn't sure. You did infuse a bit of Harry in there! But, it was a good thing, you gave Ron more depth than what I usually see in him from the books. Great job...and what Harry said to him in the end was perfect. Haven't read any of your other stories but I'll fix that! Thanks!

AWESOME!^^

I barely breathed while reading this story! After reading this bit about him performing wandless magic, I really thought "God, she's going to marry RON!"! Well, at this point I nearly suffocated! xD I nearly forgot how to breathe *rofl* Anyway, I feel sorry for Ron. *sigh*