HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 28/02/08
I cant beging to tell you how much i loved and enjoy this story
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HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 26/02/08
great fic !!this is on eof my favorites
Why coulsnt Jk do somthinglike this
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HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 26/02/08
Great fic!! This is one of my favourites
Why couldnt JK do somthinglike this
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Very cute. Well-written, and you kept everyone in character, which is a pretty hard task to accomplish if you ask me. I plan to read more of your work, too, so don't be surprised to hear from me some more!
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I wonder how you're going to close everything up in just one chapter, I wouldn't enjoy the task, but I'm sure you've done it quite spectacularly, as per your usual. : )
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Hm... I won't argue that the story is adorable, and wonderful, but things did move a little quickly between the pairs. Ron and Luna just fell of the face of the earth, eh? ; )
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Aww, cute family scene at the end. : ) How's the confrontation going to be between Harry and Ginny? Not a yelling disaster, I hope. Poor James has to stay holed up all day... Ah, well. He's a kid and I suppose we've all got to do things we don't enjoy sometimes.
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It amuses me just a bit that they're both still only partially clothed, at least as far as I read. ; ) How's James going to react to that, I wonder? I'm glad they've finally figured things out. This was a really cute chapter, and I enjoyed it a lot.
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Ahh, so I guess they're both dabbling a bit with other partners. Although, obviously, those are the people they end up with. James didn't wake up in the middle of that conversation, did he? That would probably be embarrassing to Hermione more than anyone...
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Yay! : ) She should probably inform Harry of this decision... and soon-ish probably. ; ) I suppose that means Harry and Hermione'll both know who's marrying who, and whose children are whose.
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I think Hermione would have been able to recognize her nose, eventually, right? She's a smart cookie... Anyway, glad that you've given Harry the inner turmoil of figuring things out for himself, but I hope this doesn't result in some big, disaster sort of break-up between Ginny and Harry. I'm sort of hoping that Ginny wound up kissing Malfoy after she chased after him... Any hopes for that happening?
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It's a little unfair that Harry and everyone else know that they're parents and Hermione is still just as clueless. : ( I hope it doesn't take too long for someone to tell her what's going on. I realize the S.P.E.W. deal was a nice lead on her future, but it's not the same as knowing if you're going to have children or not. I like Luna's batty way of telling Ron her thoughts on the matter of his daughter. Very cute. : )
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Well obviously McGonagall's sussed out who his mother is. ; ) It's going to be a fun moment indeed when Harry and Hermione figure it out for themselves. I'm excited!
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I feel bad for Draco. He's probably scared out of his mind. I wonder how he was (will be?) when he's finding out about his wife being pregnant. Hm... I'm assuming Luna's only there to keep her around so that she and Ron to get together or something? It's a bit useless for her to be there, considering she hasn't said much, but I realize it's pretty necessary to the story line. Great work so far.
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Hah... I somehow get the feeling that Ginny's not going to appreciate the news James carries from the future. Nice work so far. I plan to keep reading. : )
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