Meh. Didn't like the ending. I though it was very corny, hard to follow and completely unnecessary. 11 year old James ending up in the future was a nice add on, but to continue on in the future was a bit of a flop, in my opinion. I mean, I would have enjoyed it A LOT more if you had of followed 11yr old James instead. But meh. It was okay.
Otherwise, I loved the story. I really liked the fact that you stayed true to character as much as possible, and Ginny wasn't a complete whack or horrible. That Harry still cares for her and that.
I LOVED Harry and Hermione's getting together and it really is one of my favourite H/Hr starting-a-relationship-type-thing EVER. Out of the many Hhr fics I've read, that is one of my fav starts. It was just brilliant!
I like that this wasn't dragged out, and you ended it at the right time. James was very endearing, and it was funny to see him interact with all the teens. I sometimes thought that perhaps the teens were taking it too easily, but it doesn't really matter. They all had their reactions.
Again, I ADORED your H/Hr initiation scene. Was priceless.
Great story, and unique idea,
xCNx

Absolutely BRILLIANT ending there. Last two lines were gold!
I'll review again at end, but I just simply HAD TO say that.
xCNx

October 20, 2009

Hey! I just finished reading this chapter and it's beautifully done! Especially the end! I loved the way their love was expressed for each other! GOOD Job!

I can't wait to finish reading the rest of it. I've got two hours...WOOHOO!

Regards,

the_scribbler

I love this story it is truly awesomeful. I hope you write more. I am putting you on author alerts so I know if you write a sequel

it's amazing...!!!!
i definitely love it...
i love the way how harry acts around hermione after they got together...

[sighs]
i wish harry and hermione did end up in the series..it's such a waste..honestly...

I seriously love your stories!! They are better than JK's that's for sure!! Loved this ne...ryt now m in middle of a marathon of readin ur stories!! I love every moment of it!! U rock!! Awesome flair and great stories man!! Hats off!!! U r the best writer in Portkey!!
Luv
Ashlie

hi there! I love your stories! the very first fanfic that I read here was the " It's Just Pretend". But I love this one is better. It's so nice and cute... I read this story many months from now but I can't forget this story... I really love it and I hope you'll write more stories like this one...

Edz23

I cant beging to tell you how much i loved and enjoy this story

great job

great fic !!this is on eof my favorites

Why coulsnt Jk do somthinglike this

Great job

Great fic!! This is one of my favourites

Why couldnt JK do somthinglike this

Anyways great job!!!

Very cute. Well-written, and you kept everyone in character, which is a pretty hard task to accomplish if you ask me. I plan to read more of your work, too, so don't be surprised to hear from me some more!

xx RavenclawGenius

I wonder how you're going to close everything up in just one chapter, I wouldn't enjoy the task, but I'm sure you've done it quite spectacularly, as per your usual. : )

xx RavenclawGenius

Hm... I won't argue that the story is adorable, and wonderful, but things did move a little quickly between the pairs. Ron and Luna just fell of the face of the earth, eh? ; )

xx RavenclawGenius

Aww, cute family scene at the end. : ) How's the confrontation going to be between Harry and Ginny? Not a yelling disaster, I hope. Poor James has to stay holed up all day... Ah, well. He's a kid and I suppose we've all got to do things we don't enjoy sometimes.

xx RavenclawGenius

It amuses me just a bit that they're both still only partially clothed, at least as far as I read. ; ) How's James going to react to that, I wonder? I'm glad they've finally figured things out. This was a really cute chapter, and I enjoyed it a lot.

xx RavenclawGenius