Tears... this brought tears to my eyes.

Your Ron is such a lovable character and very insightful. He finally matured and matched the artwork/illustration that Mary Gran Pre had done of him in book 7. I think. I dunno why, but that picture came to mind when I read your Ron.

Amazing. Keep it up!

Holy be-Jesus! I'm really in complete awe of the intricacy of this story. It really is like a completed puzzle. You have Wormtail's payment to Harry and a really (damn) good explanation for that silver hand of his. You've got a mature Ron...something that I think a lot of people wouldn't mind seeing, because he IS a good guy - and I think JKR likes him, so this is something that could definately develop from his character.
And then, of course, is the entire concept of the pendulum. I'm not even going to ask how long it took to come up with something so original and to make it fit (with complete sense) into this story. I truly feel that you are by far one of the most talented writers on this site...And this story is a testament to the style of HP that we all love; descriptive, full of action, choosing our fates, and love.
I'm very impressed and am so happy that I took the time (well over an hour - and I have to get up for work in the morning) to read this.

Great job!!!

Sarah

PS - loved Harry's last line; made my heart swell!

I love this fic so much its amazing how you portrayed their relationship and the line where Hermione tells Harry that he's been saying he loves her every minute they've been together is so romantic and adorable I love this and all your other fics tooo

Wow, That was amazing! I love how you were able to show the love we've always seen between Harry and Hermione without brushing any of the Harry Potter books under the rug. I so wish you could have been the one to write book 7.

wow, that was a great story that had me completly into the plot line, very creative. I liked the way you so stayed so close to the books and drew from the fabulous H/HR moments JK gives us! Once again I truely enjoyed the story, thanks for a great read.

oh my god i loved that. it was so chilling in a way, and yet so...i dunno. I loved the whole thing--specially the flashbacks where he remembered everything! And the very end! But truthfully i loved it all!
MUuuucuchh muuuch loovve!

This was super.
A well conceived and well written story.
It was true to the characters - I can easily see Hermione protecting Harry to the end and Harry only realizing his feelings at the end.
A truly good job.

Wow...I don't even know what to say, I'm completely speechless...but this story was awesome! Oh my gosh, I'm practically bawling right now! It was amazing, I can see why the person that recommended this story liked it so much...lol, just amazing! Keep up the good work!

Husker_fan_2006

Oh he also doesn't mention the people he killed to fake his death either, or his framing of Sirius (Although I think when he said sorry he meant sorry for Siris too.)

Wormtail doesn't mention the fact that he also murdered Cedric in cold blood, on Voldemort's behalf, and with his wand.

wow, that was a long story. but it was so well written, and it's so sad- literally brushing tears here. Good job. keep writing- you are very talented.

This fic is absolutely gorgeous! That's kind of how I imagined 'The Last Battle' would be. Very realistic!

It is a tragedy that your story has gotten so little reviews since it is one of the best I have ever read. I believe if you would have broken this into chapters you have gotten many mroe reviews. Please don't be discouraged. You are one of the best writers here on Portkey.

It is a tragedy that your story has gotten so little reviews since it is one of the best I have ever read. I believe if you would have broken this into chapters you have gotten many mroe reviews. Please don't be discouraged. You are one of the best writers here on Portkey.

This was so well written. Really really wonderful. Perfectly believable as well. I usually don't like end of V stories because I'm waiting for book 7 to see what it really is, but I love your stories so much I had to read this. I am so glad I did. You are very talented. Thank you.