Oh how sweet! But what happened afterwards? Did they get together? I hope so!

Absolutely adorab;e i really loved it and i really hope they get together, even though its a one shot you know...

very sweet. too much description in the beginning i think. but am interested to see what happens next.

Nice one, could use a little perfecting but the idea sounds about right

Short, sweet and kinda mysterious .....I like it! I think it was great as a one-off fic and it contained everything that it needed to!

great story!!!!!!!! really loved it!!!!!!!

aw....

Is this story done?

this is excellent! poor harry better find a way to "quietly" break up ron and hermione! can't wait for more!

this is excellent! poor harry better find a way to "quietly" break up ron and hermione! can't wait for more!

I love this. You write so discriptively, and the end leaves plenty of room for imagination. I hope you've written more fics because I'm going to go look for them now!

that was ok but more r-rated and more harry hermione.make harry beat up ron and ron be a selfish basterd. thats just some of my tips and discribe what hermione looks like and what harry looks like. like is harry 6'2 devishly handsome and is lean. somthing like that. all in all its a pretty good story

Oh, I'm enjoying this! Beautiful! I will definitely add this to my chapter alert thing! update soon!

This is not a bad fic... but it seems like its incomplete... Well, as long as it means that Hermione dumped Ron for Harry then it's all good!

This is not a bad fic... but it seems like its incomplete... Well, as long as it means that Hermione dumped Ron for Harry then it's all good!