Awww...that was totally sweet! I would dearly love to know exactly what Harry & Hermione do, I am assuming something with The DoM but could just be Auror's too. *G*

Lisa

OH MY GOD!!HOW OLD IS SHE!??!EIGHT?!?!EVEN IF I HAD MY OWN CHILDREN I THINK I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO SHOW MYSELF WITHOUT A PAPER BAG ON MY FACE IF MY KID SAYS SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!AHH!!BAD MENTAL IMAGES!!HELP!!

Im torn between being fascinatingly bemused and uncomfortably squirmish, considering hhr having sex in the open, right near where their children are playing. Nothing wrong with being honest, but there is difference between honesty and discretion. especially between adults and children.

However, since its an hhr scene, it came out rather enterninly amusing.

That was great. Love the visuals. And the 'peepee' thing with the jellyfish. Very well written all the way through. The interaction with Remus and the kids was great. I especially loved the sand castle bit. Great job!

The child elements and relationship between remus and the kids was wonderful! and who dosent love the hhr married couple

BUT... i didn't like the mix of smut and kids. im sure a less blow-by-blow account would suffice?

a little more moaning and groaning while a little less dicks and clits perhaps?

im not a prude but the smut just seemed to be too heavy for a somewhat light hearted theme!

What a wonderful little story. I love Moony's interaction with the children. I've always imagined that Moony was a very gentle soul. Good job on bringing that out. Just one question though...what happened to Tonks?

Wonderful fic! I really enjoyed this one.

The scenes with Remus and the children were very sweet and touching -esp the end where James curles into him. I love the last scentence, what a fabulous way to end it: "The little boy sighs as small children do, and Remus is renewed." Lovely imagery there.

And of course the H/Hr scene was just HOT! Wow, you do know how to write the NC17 stuff. Lucky, lucky Hermione. LOL

Anyway, loved the fic, and can't wait to go read more of your work. Keep 'em coming!

~Cat

that was good im glad that remius is in there life you should have more like that it was great

OMG!!! I was laughing so hard when they started talking about the peepee!

I really liked the interaction between "Uncle Remy" and the kids, but the love scenes . . . I thought you were to graphic with descriptive words. It was really jarring-- not that scenes of childhood and scenes of sex should easily transmogrify, but it was just to grating. It can still be very sexy and engaging without having to be explicit. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Lovely little story, A mix between sweet and sexual. Great job.