Haha excellent chapter, i like the absolute realism that is set on the fic, i mean their first kiss is just like any teenager kiss would be: awkward. Nice job, hope you'll continue writing |
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Nice chapter! I like the way things sorted out. The beginning was depressing but those words harry said to her were really really sweet. I'll just continue reading and leave you another review |
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Excellent chapter, that conversation makes absolute sense with what happens in the book, i wished rowling had added it somehow but we know how she is |
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davekSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/02/08
nice ending, I really enjoyed this three shot. Luckely everthing between harry and hermoine became alright, ah well this is portkey,
ciao |
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davekSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/02/08
no wonder hermoine had to speak whit ron most of the day, he wised up a lot, up to the last part,,
ciao |
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davekSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/08
tss Ginny is a tad manipulative, that doesn't often well for a redhead, I am going to read the rest now.
Ciao |
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Personally, I like this story. However, it leaves me strongly wanting an epilogue with a Ginny!Explosion, 'cause those are funny. |
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So far, Don, I like this story. You've made Ginny out to be a manipulative b*tch. Personally, when I write my fics, that's how I make her as well.
Well written; Ginny's words play right into Hermione's fragile psyche. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/01/08
Awwww!  Fluffy-ness and love!  And I totally agree with Harry... Hermione IS beautiful and Ginny IS a cow. (Well in this story, btw).
Love it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/09/07
my god!! you are fantastic!!! love it. love it, i love the way you put their fellings |
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Nice ending - way to work it out. Wish that there was an epilogue so evil Ginny can see them together. |
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Nice to see that Ron has more emotional range than a teaspoon in this story! Great story so far! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/04/07
Well that was quite wonderful. I really liked it. A nice way to end the night. THERE'S the nice kiss that I was looking for. Lol. I knew tha tall the other fics had had it...I didn't know that this one had it. (I had previously read Good enough, in which you said there wasn't a huge kiss..) so wondefful. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/04/07
Well that was really interesting. THey wen tout for a really long time. I can't believe how long they dated. I mean..four months might not seem like a lot, but it is...considering I havne't had a relationship that's lasted for 3 months. Lol. Well, lovely job on that chapter. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/07
That would've been horrible if you ended up being a one-shot. I'm off to read the other chapter. I should be going to bed, but after reading your other story, I had to read this "short" one.  |
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