wow nice long chapter. i LOVE the story it's just a bit sad =( the angst if overwhelming, and i feel very depressed after reading it. still, you are an amazing writer.

if you have time, can you read and review my story? you're an amazing writer, and i'd love feedback from an author like yourself.

THANK YOU AND I LOVE THIS STORY

I am so glad you updated. I love the sad angsty stories. I do hope we hear from Hermione in the next chapter though. I can't wait to find out who this new character is. That was so sad that he thought Ron was calling out for him.

I think this story is quite wonderful... I love the way Harry feels and expresses himself about Hermione it feels real...Keep up the good work...

the story is good, but the real thing that made me saD Was the whole salt and pepper thing. serioulsy, i almost started to cry when you wrote how pepper was sad about salt. whats up with me? I"M CRYING ABOUT PEPPER AND SALT!!!!

fantastic.. Bloody fantastic.
It's not the kind of fic u come across every day, but it's really good.
Keep going.

I despise angst! I really don't want to spend my free time getting sad and depressed. Besides, there's enough hardship in the world as it is that I don't want to read about it in fanfic.

Having said that I can't stop reading this story! Your writing is very well done, and though I can't say I love the genre, you have managed to capture my attention with this.

I'm looking forward to reading more (though I can't guarantee I'll be able to make it to the end) and I appreciate you sharing this story with us.

this is a good story but i hope you dont have to kill of hermonie.

“How many times have you put me back together now, Hermione? I think I've lost count.” I said with a small laugh. Hermione laughed a little as well.

“Well what are best friends for if not for picking up broken Harry Potter pieces and gluing them back together?”

Thats my fave part in this chapter. You got down to the core of the friendhsip that exist between HHR as HHR shippers see them from Bks 1 to 6. Or should I say 1 to 5. The kind of friendship that leads to more...

But I should say the chapter was kinda short. I know youre back in school and school works take precedence . Goodluck to it.

Hopefully there would be more actions and more hhr scenes, longer I mean, , in the next chapter.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! this story is nice and really really uhm..have i mentioned nice? anyways...i dont understand where the nc-17 part will be coming in but ill be waiting for it...ill be waiting for the whole story in fact...please...just finish it...please dont be like other good writers who in turn just left their stories unfinished.its a shame coz their fics were sooo good though...

A very nice start. I like the desperation a lot, and I think it's coming along nicely. I wonder how much of the story is going to take place in the "present" away from the flashbacks where there'll be some more detail, clear from the mists of memory. Keep up the good work.

wow! Love the story so far, can't wait to see where this one goes.

thisis turning out to be really lovely. alll those moments they are sharing. it's just tragic that she dies. why, oh why? well, no matter, i will keep reading . great work!

I reviewd this after finishing both chapter.
I'm always obsessed with the stories I read so I hardly read angsts. However, yours is wonderful with emotional descriptions. And I always love reading from HIS POV. Although it may be tragic ending, I'll keep reading till it ends.
Sorry for my poor English with many errors, I am a Thai.
^_^

Oh this story is great, and I mean... GREAT!!
So I´m waiting in excitment for the next chapter that will make me feel sad, melancholic, happy, and warm all over at the same time. Isn´t that grand?
Keep writing you, wonderful you!!!

oh so Hermione didn't die yet? This is just the prologue again? I'm a bit confused.