MiaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
wow, this is a really great fic, short but good nonetheless  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/07
Durmstrang boys, Beauxbatons girls duh red the books or even the movie would tell you that you got it exactly the opposite.
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Wow good story. It was real nice and well written with lots of detail. Keep up the amazing work.
Thanks  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
Amazing loved it , really good , write more please
luv blonde and brunet |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/09/06
sweet. was harry a virgin too? i'll keeil that ginny if he was harry's first. |
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Lady SkiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/06
Hi!!! I really like this story, they are so right together  Love the last sentence "Nothing is ever just a dance" This was a great oneshot!!! |
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Great story! I really liked it, especialy the it was only a dance part. |
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Ok, I remember this... I think. The start was fast. Way too fast. But once you get over that fact, it's really good writing, and a good story. Erm, from what I remember :$
Ok, gotta go- Dad is angry with me :$
Bye,
Spyro
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What beautiful writing! I always love a H/Hr story. The passion from your writing stood off the page. It was just wonderful! Keep up the beautiful work! |
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That was a very nice ending to the dance. And it was very well written and descriptive. |
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Excellent story! Yay, Harry & Hermione get it on! Now, if only JK Rowling would see the light. |
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aww I loved it, it was amazing. I love the writing and the story. I love it. You're a wonderful author.
keep it up
-megz- |
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Ohh, I loved that! That was very sweet!
I'm not quite sure about your use of the word "acutely" in a couple circumstances towards the beginning of the story, but that's alright (and I could be wrong anyhow... *shrug*)
Hehe, good story 
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Lol thanks... but it wasn't mine  written by writers are insane... original is on ff.net under that name. She asked me to post it up here so... I editted it and did so. I was gonna change "acutely" to a different word but I kinda forgot  lol.
Anyways... thanks go through me from writers are insane
Alex |
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that was good i liked it i liked how they finally got together it was good |
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