lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/07
I liked this story. It was sensitive and not too over the top as far as angst goes.
There were one or two places where I thought the word choices were a bit awkward or words not fully spelled out but this is fanfiction so just try to do better.
All in all, good one shot. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and for the critique. I try to make my writing better. :] |
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Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the review. I hope you liked the other stories too.  |
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mugglemomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/06
Good little story. Innocent and sweet. Light on the dramatic without losing the depth of emotions that are running under current. |
Author Feedback: thank you so much for reading it. 
i really appreciate every review i get.  |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/06
Definatley I like it! It was bettersweet and a little of the finality of the final battle. |
Author Feedback: aw. thank you so much for reading it. i really appreciate your review! |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/06
Nice story. How many languages can you speak? So far I am guessing English, French, Spanish and German? |
Author Feedback: hahaha. i wish. I can only master English and Spanish. In French I'm almost there. And I was learning Arabic (I have to practice more).... hmm.. I want to learn German and I know a few words in Japanese. thanks for liking the sotry. i really appreciate it.  |
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Awww very nice. I love that she told him in a different language. Very sweet. And YAY for David Bowie and Queen. |
Author Feedback: yeah, i thought it would be different if it were in another language. thank you for loving it!  and yes, yay for David Bowie and Queen. they are awesomeness. lol. i really like them and they just inspired me with that song.  |
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Pour toujours. Pour toujours. Harry and Hermione forever. Wow. That was amazing. You have, style darling. Keep it up!
Pour toujours |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! i love your review. i have style? thank you! i hope to hear from you more. |
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mannequinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/06
I thought of that movie when I read the title for this! My fav boy Gaspard Ulliel is in it. |
Author Feedback: really? i'm glad someone else knows about the movie. thanks for reading it. i really apprecaite it. |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/06
Very nice, it was very moving, angsty yet hopeful. If I were to improve on it, I would make sure all the tenses on 'scare' were correct. Anyway, I enjoyed it! |
Author Feedback: lol. thanks . yeah it wasn't corrected by my sister/beta.. i just wanted to post it. thanks for reading it! |
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Mage_13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/06
It's very good!!
A short, but sweet and nice one-shot!!
Great job!!
Keep it up! i'm looking forward to read some more of your fics!! |
Author Feedback: aw. thank you! this is the first review that has brought a nice big smile to my face (?) ! lol thank you! |
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connieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/06
doesnt je'taime mean i love you...not i like you? maybe u should have checked what it means |
Author Feedback: je t'aime means i love you. that's what it meant in mys tory. i dont think i said it meant i like you. thanks for reading. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/06
I thought it was good but is that all of it? |
Author Feedback: yeah, it's all of it. thanks for reading. |
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101309Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/06
I like it!, please continue with the good work and update soon |
Author Feedback: thanks for being the first reviewer. i'm glad you like it. this is a one-shot. i don't think i'll write a sequel to it. that is, unless people really like it and somoething pop into my head. i'm already thinking of something, but iono. well, thank you! |
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