CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/08/06
Ah, another wonderful fic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Loved them getting caught by McGonagall. LMAO That was great. Wonderful job! ~Cat |
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My heart is happy now  That story was incredibly sweet. Great job! |
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Such a fun and cute story! I found myself laughing out loud most of it, and Harry being so cute about wondering who Hermione liked was very sweet.. hehe.. Can't wait to read more of yours! |
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I really liked it. I thought you kind of stalled wtih the guessing game making the whole thing much longer than it needed to be. But McGonagall find them was good, I like that she suggested it but congratuating him if you want to keep them in true character that would never have happend. |
Author Feedback: Ah see, the *real* conversation was much longer. I think it lasted... at least half an hour. Mostly it was just "Tell me" "no" "tell me" "no" over and over... lol. This was a much shorter version of the conversation... obviously. I remember repeating "I like" over and over... and yeah. Guessing game wasn't as stalled as the real conversation 
 thanks! I liked McGonagall too... thank dark_spyro for that one... she's a good one! Congratulating... probably wouldn't've happened, but I wrote another story where she was disapproving and I got reviews telling me I should've had her congratulating them or something. *shrug*
But thanks again! I'm glad you liked it!
Alex |
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JulesySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
BR-
The line of:
"Her stomach seemed to have fallen out of her bottom"
Just sounds so oddly dirty for some odd odd reason. I couldn't help but imagine her looking down at the floor and just saying 'oops'. I'm a sad sad person. Almost pissed myself laughing. =o)
Great work tho. I loved it. Two thumbs up.
-J |
Author Feedback: Hahaha... lol oh dear... >.<
Man, now I'm thinking about that... how terribly funny.
Lol anyway, I'm glad you loved it! thanks!
Alex |
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Ohh, Ohh, I absolutely loved that! So so cute! And I know JUST how Hermione's feeling! The beginning of this fic is like... a PERFECT description of how I'm feeling! It's brilliant! Oy, I wish I could have Hermione's luck!
I loved this fic! I can't wait for more of The Return and more little one-shots from you! Wonderful! 
Hehe, I loved what you did with McGonagall! ;D
Yay, I loved this fic! =D So cute! I need my Harry to notice me! *cries*
*Pouts*
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Haha... yay! Yeah, I feel like that most of the time... I'm having issues with a... "friend"... issues with feelings, and we feel the same way but it wont work... they live in another state. -.-" Stupid freaking distance.
The Return will be updated soon... I promise!
Thanks hun. Your Harry will notice you... *glares at him* lol there. *hug*
Alex
PS: Oy, come online! |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
That was a very cute little one shot. Good Job. Keep up the good work.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
aww that was so adorable!! i absolutely loved it! great job!! i hope u write more fics soon!!! |
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hatebelowSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
oh i luvit.conversation kute, mcgonagall hilarious. goodluck with your exams this was great |
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mrrlyn42Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
nice story....i like thier argument and how they figured everything out. and the touch with the prof catching them and what she said was perfect |
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Great fic. I love everything in it and I couldn't stop laughing when Pro. McGonagall showed up! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!---Tiger111991 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
It was always meant to be Harry and I…
well, I hope Rowling will quit the ron-hermy thing and make it harry-hermione! or oherwise she's stupider than a dung bomb! |
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lovely story, quite brilliant. Thought it was well written and a cute idea! |
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First off, I love McGonagall! Her conversation with Harry was great. And Harry and Hermione admitting their feelings was adorable. They should send Luna a present (her suggestion started everything, really). Such sweet fluff! Gotta love it! (And congratulations on finishing your exams! I'm sure you did wonderfully!) |
Author Feedback: haha thanks ^^" I like writing (and reading) McGonagall like that... terribly amusing.
Ah thanks... I dunno if I did wonderfully lol... >.< The conversation I had that this story was based on happened the night before my first exam... Lol I wasn't concentrating very hard for the rest of the week.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
Alex |
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Wonderful story! I love Professor McGonagall in her tartan dressing gown! I've always enjoyed your stories in the past, so please keep writing! |
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