GoonerJimSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/07
I liked that, very funny fic! Very in character too, which doesn't often happen with a fic set years later, good job  |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/07
Oh, great story. Poor Hermione, what a rotten day! Every time I thought it couldn't possibly get worse, it did. You have an evilly creative mind. I loved her temper, though. And poor Harry, stepping naively into her way...but a nice fluffy ending. And the last bit about the coffee pot not being plugged in was hysterically funny. |
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hauahuahua funny, funny... But you know... she is an idiot... she was supposed to opena smile and think that it wasn't the worst day of her life and yet, the best... and ginny was... forget it! |
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GryyphynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/11/06
That's why I stopped drinking coffe. I broke a coffe pot one morning for exactly that reason. Well, close: I had the damned thing plugged in, it started working, and the filter box overflowed. My water heater had broken the night before, leaving a wet bathroom floor and my favorite mug was outside with a frozen cup of coffe in it. Yeah, I called in sick and went back to bed.
And this actually did happen so I can relate. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/06
Crazy, I tell you. Kind of like a play I did in the third grade. Well, not really, but the ending was almost the same with a different story plot.
Anyways, great job!!! |
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CallieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/06
very cute. i think every one has had a day like that, i sure know i have. yay for harry making her feel better! |
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Hee! That was a fantastic ending. The chuckle I got from it was a perfect way to end this story; thanks for sharing it! |
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Hee! That was a fantastic ending. The chuckle I got from it was a perfect way to end this story; thanks for sharing it! |
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Wonderful! Absolutely breathtaking! I can say from personal experience how horrible it feels to go through a day like that and even when something good happens, you barely notice it because you're SOOO pissed off!
Brilliantly written too, I might add!
Get some more ideas to show all of us at Portkey, please! |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
that was a very cute little one shot. Keep up the good work. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
*wipes tears of laughter off face* Tha was CLASSSIC!!!*doublesd over in hysterics*
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Aww, that was adorable. The "Don't try to make sense of my logic" line was hilarious. It made me think of "I don't feel that I need to explain my art to you, Warren." from "Empire Records". Maybe that's just me, though. Anyway, delightful! I love how Hermione kept forgetting she was a witch and the meeting with her boss was hysterical. Is her foot moving in with her mouth soon? And then the nice digs at the clueless-ness of men had me cracking up. But you got to love Harry's innocence and confusion. Above all, an adorable story! It definitely made my bad day better! |
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Ha Ha I loved it Loved it Loved it!  I absolutely can't wait to see whats next! It is lookin really good from this first chapter!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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It's good to read some more of your stuff! And This is hilarious! I love everything and the ending was quite approperit! (SP?) I can't wait to read more of your stuff no matter how long it may be!---Tiger111991 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/06
That was very entertaining, and I loved the irony of it all |
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