uhu, but what else happened. could you do a sequel? it would be beautiful to see them married all of them to know if the baby was a girl or boy, to know what happened to Herms' dad. anyways the story was great but please do a sequel...

Really nice story. It has been exhilerating to read. Only, your English grammar is sometimes terrible, and it is definitely American English.

That was a really good story. The only things I didnt like about it was that you didnt make the part where Voldemort dies very exciting and you have a lot of misspellings, and um I am 95% sure that certain... things... cant last 6 hours... It was really good though!

I hope it won't offend you, but this story is total and utter crap.
Oh well, maybe not that bad, but you you need to fix a LOT of things.
First of all, Hermione has NOT been beaten at home.. she'd never be the way she is now if she was.
Secondly.. MAKE THE TEXT SMALLER!
Thirdly... hmm.... check the spelling.

It was a great story! Really touching and powerful! Keep up the writing.

That was so good ! ! !

Harry and Hermione Forever ! ! !

The storyline is good, but the spelling and grammar errors are really distracting. Perhaps you could find a beta? I know spellcheck won't pick up some of the errors like "peace" should be "piece", etc. Other than that, I really like the storyline. Keep on writing !

Other than being ridiculously cheesy and corny at times, it's a good story.

It's a really great story, I love it. But how tall is Harry and what does he look like? I think he should be like 6'3 or 6'4. Anyway update soon!!!

:O. holy crap. that was. so. crazy. lmfao. you. kick. ass. why. am . i. writing. like. this?

I am sorry to say that you are in desparate need of a beta reader. Kudos for posting, but this piece really needs some work with the grammar and spelling. Sorry to be blunt, but I try to call it as I see it.

this is a...disturbing fanfic. it was very well written and an excellent story, although i don't think it could be rated nc17.

this is a...disturbing fanfic. it was very well written and an excellent story, although i don't think it could be rated nc17.

Please use a beta, or spellcheck, or something. So many misspellings (of the English language and of the spells used). Decent enough story, but the grammar and spelling kept drawing me out of the storyline.