AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 11/10/07
I loved this story. You are a terrific writer. I'm sad to see you go but we all have to move on sometime. I really enjoyed it and will be checking out some of your other stories. |
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Aww I'm so sad its your last story here! But what a great story to end with. Well good luck to whatever you're moving on to, love all your work! |
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LineanUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
Awwww this was it? well what a note to leave on... that story was amazing and I loved it from the beginning to the very end. I hope you get to write many books that will all become best sellers.
Sad to see a good writer go,
Linean |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
Really enjoyed this story, sorry to see you leave Portkey, but if you are on to bigger and better things, I wish you luck. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
P.S. The bit about Harry removing the chandeliers from No.12 was brilliant. A simple little line that spoke volumes. |
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ivyUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
Oh, it was excellent!!! It was a little bit short but, hey....everything was perfect!!! Do you know that I love all your fics? It is a shame that this is your last fic...why, oh, why? I do hope you\'d change your mind...Anyways, good luck on whatever your plans are...You really are a great writer! |
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What a lovely story all in all! I just wish it was a little longer! Great writing and I hope you keep at it - whether it's harmony or not! |
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What a lovely story all in all! I just wish it was a little longer! Great writing and I hope you keep at it - whether it's harmony or not! |
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gakSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
I have to admit. The first time I read this final chapter I felt disappointment and was let down. I expected the usual unrealistic action wherein the hero suddenly proclaims his love to the beautiful heroine right then and there.
BUT . . . when I read the chapter for a second time . . . well, I fell in love. I realized that I had rushed through my first reading missing so many important details, so many important words and expressions that made this ending so perfect. I have enjoyed every chapter of this story, finding many paragraphs profound and memorable but this final chapter beats them all.
I look forward to reading your published books. You have a wonderful talent with words. I have enjoyed many stories here at Portkey but have only found a handful of writers who I thought were very talented but only one or two who I felt could make that transition from fanfiction to the world of books. You have that ability. I hope you take on that challenge. Best of luck in all that you do! And, thank you for the wonderful stories you leave behind. |
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Nice cliffie! This story just gets better and better! Evil to leave it hanging like this, but luckily, the next chapter is already up! |
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This is all too sad for words! I can totally feel the heartache! Why is Harry so blind to Hermione's feelings? Nice that Ron was perceptive enough to know what is going on! Btw - nice comment about how if he wasn't dating Luna, one would question Ron's leanings! |
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How tragic for Hermione! I really liked the mature and understanding Ginny! Ang I know that Elizabeth cannot be as perfect as she seems! |
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How sad that Hermione feels that she can't compete! Great first chapter! I must read on! |
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CokieismeSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/10/07
I'm very sad. I don't want this to be the last!! But I'll accept it and I hope to continue reading your stuff, whatever it may be. |
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that was just- omgnwlrjgswhrn YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE US! but i understand. it is time to move on. sorry for sounding so childish and not mature, but this sotry brought me to tears and it was just perfect. one of those stories you are lucky to find and you'll remember forever. this is what Harry and Hermione is.
i loved it, lived it, and enjoyed it. wonderful work. i hope you have a wonderful future. |
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