This was really nice! I really liked it  . Usually I don't like to read one shots but yours looked very good and I'm glad I read it! I liked the whole concept with 10 past 4, and how you got the idea  . I liked the end when Hermione notices that it's 4:10 when they kiss, and the little divination part was a good end to the story  . |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
I really liked this! Normally I don't read one shots but yours intrigued me and I was not disappointed. I liked the end, when they kissed and Hermione realized it was 4:10. The divination part was a good addition to the story as well  . Good job! |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Very nice. I liked this fic, a lot. I chuckled when Hermione thought she should maybe look into Divination again. LOL That was cute. Anyway, great job -loved it! ~Cat |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
I really liked the idea that it was at the time 10 past four instead of the date 4/10. Great idea and it was extreamly cute. There was one mistake, you spelt barely wrong...hehehe. Nice job with the whole idea. Very cute.  |
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Aww, cute story  ! I thought the part were Ginny tried to lie, but reverted was worthy of a few snickers. It was sort of like 'no, you only think what you saw was real, but in actuallity it was... oh f**k it, yeah Harry, I was snogging Draco senceless and you walk in on us. Next time knock.'
I, too, thought that since you had the refrence to the month of April and the time of 4:10 that you would have used the April 10th date, but it turned out very nice the way it did. Kudos! I'd like to read others like this from you, you did a great job on this one. |
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MrsGordoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Also in England we write dates the other way round so it would actually be 10/04. Cute story, a fag-break fanfic as i like to call them. Can read them in the same time as having a cigerette break at work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
I liked it. I thought the April thing would work too. I thought that was where you were going, but the time and the fact that it was April works too. You never said it WASN'T April 10th so it could still work. The date and the time. |
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misstakeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Very nice. I love this concept! And that is one rather heated kiss. lol Good for Harry. We all knew it was bound to happen. lol
great job, darlin. |
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heehee... it's funny you mentioned that at first you wanted it to be the date, because that's exactly what I thought when you mentioned an April morning... cute little fluff piece, I love it!! |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Hey, I figured you were going for the date aspect also. But the time aspect worked. Great story! |
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crookshankUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Good fic!  A little rushed, I think. Hary moving in on Hermione just after he broke off with Ginny, even if he has been thinking of post-Ginny life a while now. But its hhrness to the full so it still rates better than the romance we got in HBP. |
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Oh! I get it! That was pretty cute, actually, and the 4:10 thing definitely sets it apart from all the other nameless, faceless fluff one-shots out there. Nice job.
-MR |
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