AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/06
Very nice! Great story... I would love to see this scene in the next book. Hermione was very well done! |
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dumblesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/08/06
Ah... short, sweet and very romantic!!! Two thumbs and two big toes up!!!   |
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ohh so cute , i really liked it it was shor and fluffly and so cute  |
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very very cute strory. loved it so much,. i loved how harry kissed her and that i always listen to tou speech. it was a perfect monment. |
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Aww, That was so cute! I love the Ron/Luna subplot. Yay for kissy poo Harry & Hermione!  |
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NicoleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Oh, that was so sweet! Although, I do think sometimes when people aren't experienced at all, it's all right to ask. (Like when it's one of the people's first kiss, I mean.) |
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H/Hr LoveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Aww that was such a sweet one shot! A bit on the short side, but I loved it. Harry and Hermione are so cute together.
If you have time, please read and review my story. You're an amazing writer and I'd love your feedback :]
I'm gonna read all of your other stories when I have time. |
Author Feedback: LOL I was worried it might be a bit on the long side. Now I feel like I've left some stuff out. But I'm glad that you liked it anyways. hehe
Oh, i will deffinately have to go and do that here shortly. Thanks for wanting my opinion. It means alot.
Thanks so much for the great review, darlin! |
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Harry always listen her, awww, I loved this story, was really cute, indeed |
Author Feedback: Aww, thanks so much, sweetie. I'm glad you liked it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
Oh my goodness.. thats a lesson all blokes need to learn.. never ask a bird if you can snog her.. ever. it makes us girls think too much and it just makes the moment awkward..  nice story |
Author Feedback: My sentiments EXACTLY!! lol Always take the moment in your own hands. lol
Thanks for the great reveiw, darlin. |
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Aww, very cute. I loved the “I always listen to you”. Just another reason why they are so perfect for each other. Isn't Harry just adorable? And silly Ron, but it's his fault. Asking always ruins the moment. Glad Harry knows better than that! |
Author Feedback: What can I say? Harry's a quick learner. lol I totally agree with you.
Thanks for this fabulous reveiw, darlin! I'm glad that you liked the story. |
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There you go, Harry! You listen AND you follow through! Now there's someone Hermione can get attached to!!
Wonderful story! Loved every minute of it! |
Author Feedback: And attached she does. lol
Thanks for the reveiw, darlin. I'm glad that you like it! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
That was a really cute chapter. Wow, Ron is quite dumb when it comes to girls. Poor Luna. Well, that was a great job. I loved it. |
Author Feedback: LOL he IS a bit daft sometimes, isn't he? But that's why I love him.
Thanks so much, darlin! |
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It was cute.
I was alittle confused in the beginning since I thought Ron and Hermione were dating and that he had asked Hermione to kiss him not Luna.
But than once Hermione explained it to Harry it made a lot more sense. But I would go back in to the first couple chapters and look over it because when they were fighting it sounded a lot like it was Ron asking hermione to kiss him not Luna.. |
Author Feedback: that was sort of the point for a bit. I was torn between actually mentioning Luna earlier or just leaving it as her. But I like the out come. lol I'm sorry i confused ya for a bit. It wasn't the idea, but to just have people be like "wait, what?"
Thanks for the reveiw, darlin. |
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*nods* Very true. Very true. Hermione is just full of knowledge on every subject.  hehe. Good thing Harry does listen, huh?  |
Author Feedback: LOL good thing indeed! She's a smart cookie, that Hermione Granger.
Thanks for the reveiw! |
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