So frickin sad. I cried in this chapter... really.
The: \" “She disappeared.”




“Disappeared? What do you mean?”




“After the funerals, she simply vanished. People say they see her, appearing when someone\'s need is great, or a great injustice is committed, but she never stays anyplace for long. She does great things for people, but asks nothing in return. There are rumours that she visits Ronald and Luna regularly, and they alone are her contacts with the world, but one can\'t believe every rumour that one hears,” the voice clearly showing that this was one rumour that was true.\" \"

So sad. So - I\'m guessing Arthur\'s just died and is retelling the story of HHr to Harry who\'s almost forgotten after being dead so long??

What the hell of an HHr story is this? Hermione cheating on Harry with Draco, Harry being killed, we barely see any kind of romance between Harry and Hermione, every moment of that kind is between her and Draco...what's the point of posting it here on Portkey? And no, the fact that she told him she loved him while he was dying, or even before in that room when he found her and Draco, doesn't matter, because that kiss was not something out of the bloue, it was something that had been building for chapters, so it's not a mistake, it's truly cheating!

I think this is one of the worst stories I've ever read, not frot he style mind you, you write quite well and you make the readers really feel, more than once I found myself on the verge of crying. No, it's not the way it is written that's terrible, it's the content. I'm really wondering why this story is here, you know. doesn't seem an HHr story to me and not because of Harry's death, I've read stories with in it before but in those at least there was no doubt of the character's feelings for each other. At the moment, I still don't know if Hermione ever truly loved Harry or not, and I'm inclined to think she didn't right now. Otherwise the whole Draco thing would have never happened.

I'm sorry if you are offended by this review, or if it is too harsh, but this story, which started with great premises, let me down immensely. And, if you wanted to go this way, you could have alerted the readers with some A/N at the beginning, or at the very least with the Drama/Angst labels instead of the romance one.

You are an awesome writer and this was extremely well written. However, I would never have read it if I knew ahead of time that you were going to kill Harry. I absolutely hate that part and choose to change the ending in my own imagination. When I read a story labled as romance, I expect to read romance, which normally has a happy ending. But I did love the rest of the story!

Herminia hearts Calmacil20. Truly. But seriously, folks, this is a great story. Harry's death scene and the epilogue, with Harry's wistfulness and longing, are just so perfectly written. I can't imagine better. :-) Great, great stuff. I'd ask you to write more, but this is such a perfect stopping point and I'd hate to ask you to compromise your authorial integrity by signing on for an endless loop of sequels ;-)

Very interesting, you're setting everything up very naturally, and more importantly, everyone sounds like themself. It's very exciting, I can't wait to see how the raid goes!

omg at first i didnt believe harry died and before i read further i started thinking of all the ways you could bring him back...it was so sad but beautiful...i had almost forgotten about the prologue, and when i read the epilogue i was it hit me...very nicely done...GOOD JOB ...looking forward to more

Oh my god. Chapter 21, I actually bawled my eyes out. It was that good.

I would rather Harry be in heaven then on an island, but maybe that island is his heaven.

Anyways, this was a nice story, and it's actually kind of sad to know that it won't be going on anymore.

You did great. Hope to read some more after DH from you.

Jamie.

Great story. That was soooo sad! It such a sad chapter. I like this story. This isn't the last chapter is it? I hope not. Well, if it isn't, Update soon! And if it is, Great story!

Thats so sad. Do you plan on continuing this story with Harry in heaven?

That would be a really good idea. I love it when people do that...

Anyways, wonderful post, and hopefully you continued, but if not, it was a good story.

Jamie

But ... HOW? WHY?
I mean, come on! You killed Harry!! Now the Arthurian legend comes up, uh? I really hope he's coming back, don't know how though. And I'm curious to know about Hermione and her role in this legend. Morgana as Hermione? I hope Luna lets out what she is feeling and knows about.

nooo, so cruel. thats can't be real. I hope things work themselved out in the next chapter

You killed Draco. Not even a goodbye kiss from Hermione. = /
Don't kill Hermione or Harry! Hope HERMIONE kicks Bella's ass!

I'd seen this story on Portkey before, but hadn't thought to read it yet. Now that I've gotten this far, I'm intensely excited. King Arthur legends are a favorite of mine, and this makes a great deal of sense. Bellatrix would, of course, make a perfect dark lady (lord? ).

I liked this cliffhanger a great deal. As for the action, I'm saddened Draco had to die but he put up a wonderful fight and got his revenge. I wish I knew who had killed his mother, though. Lastly, unlike the characters, I'm not surprised Harry let Hermione go. It sounds like something he'd do, but still it was a heartbreaking moment. Thanks so much for sharing this with everybody here at Portkey!

YES! (oh my gosh not the part that Draco's dead...that would seem horrible)

but, YES! for the fact that its Harry and Bellatrix. I really wanted to see Harry kill her in DH, but he didn't give a rats a.ss So i am glad you're doing so.

Jamie.

aww i just read the "revelations" chapter
that was so sad poor harry, i cant believe ron did that! didnt he think how harry would feel? to find out in that manner?..
anyways back to review...i liked it..it kept me interested, i was so interested in what was happening to the love aspect of the story that i totally skimmed thru belatrix's part