This one is very original. Bonus points for making Ginny and Ron decent people and not angry monsters.

Also, the OCs sound mysterious. I can't stop suspecting of them. Something is up, I think.

I feel bad for Hermione. Harry needs to be knocked on the head repeatedly. I wonder how you'll pull the HHr off after the way Harry and Hermione are acting. That'll be interesting to read.

Luna and Hermione's makeovers caught me off guard. I hope it's nothing permanent. It kind of sends a superficial message. But I'm not complaining, just pointing it out.

Cheers! Hope you update someday!

harry and hermione hello ? ? ? ? ? sorry im just impatient . . . . . .
great chapter ! ! ! ! ! !

harry and hermione forever and ever and ever

i thought u said that the whole harry alexandria thing was gonna be over?? its most deffinatly NOT OVER!! uhggg.. i dont like herr.. well i mean i guess i just dont like her bcuz shes dating harry well supposedly datingh harry.. anyways good job but i realy want to see harry hermione.. nothing was even in this chapter about them!! uhggg,,

not the best chpater, but certainly not bad. it was good, b\just not my fav. i cant wait for more! so anxious. you are a great writer. updatge soon!! muuch muuch loove Au Revoir

Poor, poor Harry. What a horrible thing to see. This was a great chapter and, although you may not want to hear this, I'm not tired of Alexandria at all. Well done. I can't wait to read more.

Yeah, those boys are just horrible friends, throwing Herminone parties and all that. Seriously, how they were "treating her"?? They weren't treating her badly at all - she brought it all on herself. But in this chapter there is a sign that she is starting to get a clue - treat them like actual *friends* even if you wish one of them was more than a friend. That's what friends DO. Then, she starts to think about herself and what she wants, instead of obsessing over Harry and - ta da!!! - he notices her. Very realistically written I think and I really like it. And again, you have me feeling sorry for Draco. Good chapter.

Poor Harry with his headaches - I wonder if you're going somewhere with that or if it was just a way to get Alexandria into his bed. I hope you're going somewhere with it other than just the bed part, although I totally don't mind the visual of Harry lying in bed with a pretty girl who makes him feel better. Good for him, even if it isn't Hermione.

I also feel somewhat sorry for Draco Malfoy, which is something I didn't expect. Another good chapter. Nice story.

See, now here is another example of Hermione being completely unfair. SHE is the one who isolated herself, either by walking away or by being bitchy, yet she has the nerve to act like Ron and Harry did something wrong and left her out of the loop. She can't have it both ways. Ron said to her the exact thing *I* would have said to her - he was actually nicer than I would have been - and Harry has the patience of a saint where she's concerned. And there at the end there is another bitchy episode and STILL Harry allows her to use Hedwig. I don't think I would be so nice to someone who was being so snotty to me. I'd like to feel sorry for her, but she makes it extremely difficult. Again, though, I really like the story, and I enjoy it (despite there still being some odd typos) and where you're going with it. Don't let my complaints about Hermione get you down. Even though I don't like her, the way she is acting is really quite realistic in terms of teenage girls. It's a shame they don't figure out sooner that they're their own worst enemies.

LOVE Harry and Neville blasting Moody off of his feet. Well done. I also love the whole Ron and Luna thing.

But again, I have a problem with Hermione. Harry is perfectly nice and sweet to her. What he isn't doing is acting like he's in LOVE with her - that isn't a "bad" thing or something he's doing wrong, and that is where Hermione is going wrong. Shit happens. Her acting the psycho - up one minute, down the next - with NO explanation for HER poor behavior is going to do nothing to endear her to Harry. Why would he like her like that when she is being so... psycho?? Other than my problems with Hermione, it's a very interesting story. I can actually see why Harry would like Alexandria - she seems fairly uncomplicated and pretty, so why not?? Hermione has to shock Harry out of his "best friend" status and NOT by being a bitch. She'll get there, I imagine. Interesting story. Well done.

Love the bits with Ginny and Beau. Also like that Jaina is bringing Malfoy down a peg. However, Hermione is sinking to a low level, in my opinion. If she wants someone to like her as someone other than a friend, it's best not to act the weirdo around them. It's totally unfair (although I see girls do it all the time) to expect someone to "like" you and then when they don't immediately behave how you want to, act the bitch. Other than my problem with Hermione, and a few very interesting typos, it's a very interesting story.

Okay just wondering when it's going to turn H/Hr. And honestly what's up with these triplets, I can't tell if they're evil or not. Jaida and Alexandria I'm leaning towards the persuasion that they're manipulative.

More Alexandria and Harry ... oh well ... but what Dumbledore said was right but still ... that girl needs to be Hermione not Alexandria ... but whatever it was still a good chapter and i never really thought about how much Draco and Harry are alike ... its kind of scary ... well update soon
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I in joy your story! Please keep up the great work! Jimmy

NO!! Please don't leave us hanging like this!!
Harry is so stupid to not think of Hermione!!

But anyway, I am still sooooo loving your story! I do hope you'd update this quite soon! I am really looking forward to it!

Good job and keep it up!!

DIE ALEXANDRIA! HE'S HERMIONE'S!
It's good, curious to see what happens.