one thing, this is a great story, i wish the chapters were longer...but they aren't real people no matter how much we all wish they were...just throwing that one in there...after a yearlongwait, i expected a bit more, but i loved this chapter all the same. merci tres beaucoup!

i adore this fic... i just, i wonder wen they do eventually gewt together (afterall this is HHr lol) will he loive her as much as ginny, will u discuss that 1???

anywayz,
im so glad u didnt giv up on thsi fic b/c then i wuldnt hav foudn ti and fallen in luv with it, i hope u update soon!!

I am sorry
But do you seriously think hermione would ever like a jerk like Ron who treats her pretty badly?
That is an emotionally abusive relationship.
The thought of R/hr getting intimate is puking and makes me throw up.
Hermione for one , has never shown any attraction towards Ron and neither does Ron.
If you do get any evidence of that in any of the 6 books of the Hp series , do tell me.
As for Ginny/Harry, Harry apart from attraction has never shown any deeper feelings for her.
It was just lust.

Mind you I am not a troll.
Just wanting to vent my displeasure with the way your fic is going.

All I can say is "WOW!" This is an awesome fic!! Please update!

Excellent and very interesting. I hope Hermione doesn't turn nasty when she finally does wake up (which I hope isn't the next chapter - I think Harry needs to spoil them rotten a bit more). Anyway, I look forward to reading more.

This a well written story, and quite sweet, but some of the details (uncannily mature three year olds) don't mesh. To me the most inexplicable is the statement here that "the press had a field day" combined with the statement in the last chapter that Harry kept up with magical newspapers. Then how could Harry not have known? The contradiction doesn't seem central to the story (whether or not there was a press fury, or whether the births were concealed from the media doesn't seem to matter much), rather more thought needs to be put into details.

REALLY GREAT STORY I AM VERY INTEREST TO FIND OUT HEROMINE IS GOING TO REACT TO HARRYS RETURN.

it was great as usua. i really like this one. good work. cant wait to hear more!

I hope Harry and Hermione will be able to work things out. I can imagine that there is alot of anger and resentment buried in Hermione. Looking forward to reading more...

The kids were absolutely cute!!Halter tops?Lol!So adorable!
I'm just really curious on how you are going to make Harry and Hermione fall in love after always stressing out that they are both in love with their Weasley pairs...
Keep it up and please do update soon... Curiousity kills the cat and I just might be dead if you don't update soon...

Can't wait to see what Harry does to make things right. Hope he and Hermione do actually fall in love with each other.

I like your story but the girls are much too mature for toddlers. Even if they are super smart, unless Hermione has exposed them to many things, they shouldn't be speaking like teenagers. Intellgence and maturity are two separate things.

I love this story to pieces, but could do without all the Ginny references. I suppose you must have a point for it though, and it will be revealed in due time.

I'm a little worried about the girls though. It's so strange reading the story because you have them portrayed as very mature little girls, and then it throws me off a bit when you mention that they're only toddlers! I can't wait for Hermione to wake up and see where she stands in this relationship.

Oh wow I love your story! I've only just found it on portkey and I think it is fantastic. I love stories like this - with either Harry or Hermione going away and Harry not knowing about his children.

The only thing that does bother me though is how grown-up the children are. For three year olds they sound too much like 13 year olds. But that's only a minor thing.

I don't get how Harry and Hermione managed to get together, even for one night, if they were both so much in love with Ginny and Ron. From the chapters I've read so far, it seems as though Harry is still in love with Ginny, and is convinced that Hermione loves Ron. So I can't see how, even for one night only, Harry and Hermione managed to get together.

I hope this will be explained in later chapters. I do love this story, and I am enjoying reading it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love Jacquianne xxx

I love Harry having to learn to deal with two little girls. Preparing for the bubble bath was great, and you didn't forget the little yellow rubber duck!! Then the shopping trip, I think Harry is realizing that two dynamos of little girls are quite a handful .... I don't think dealing with Voldemort wasn't as tiring as these twins!