MuddguttsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/03
Bloody Brilliant story  I love this, I just wish this was in the book. Maybe I can print it out really small and slip in inside the book. what do you think? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/12/03
go to http://www.outwar.com/page.php?x=1876496 |
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Merlin's Beard! I can see why this got nominated in the Portkey Awards! Simply breathtakingly perfect. I love it! It so sad, yet so full of hope and heart and whatever else it is that gives you that warm feeling inside. It makes me feel great knowing that my fic was nominated in the same category with one so good as this one. It would be an honor to lose to you! I don't know what else to say about it other than that I love it! Great work! |
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KypDurronSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/12/03
Hopefully, 'them' means they're together. *winks* |
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KypDurronSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/03
Home is where his heart is, and since his heart is with Mione, home is where Mione is.  *winks* |
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athenaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/03
Gil,
That was simply beautiful. I had read this before and found the tears running down my face due to all of the emotion that you poured into it.
That is the kind of drama that I absolutely adore. I love it when characters strip themselves naked emotionally and just become incredibly vulnerable. And this is what you did here with Harry. Except that of course he didn't vocalize all the inner thoughts he had to Hermione. Had it been said out loud the things he realized, then there would of course be NO turning back.
All that you laid out shows the depth of feeling between those characters and it makes me shake my head to those R/Hr shippers that I debate with that insist that there is absolutely no H/Hr buildup and that they would feel cheated if it happens.
:Sigh: They are really missing out on a beautiful love story that is being told before their very eyes.
Athena |
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TricksterSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/11/03
a very nice addition  sometimes the structure was confusing, because you kept switching between "The Little Prince" quotes, flashbacks, and what was currently going on. |
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TricksterSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/11/03
what a beautiful piece - subtle, in character, and definitely thought provoking (alright, for Harry, since we all realized half of what he just did within the first few books  ) |
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EriseSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/10/03
Ahhh, I haven't read the Little Prince before, but now I feel like reading it, it sounds really interesting.
And I liked Dumbledore recognising how much Harry needs Hermione, and that bit about sugarless lemon drops, lol. |
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EriseSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/03
Very nicely done, this fic. I liked how Harry flashed back on all our fluffy H/Hr moments, only problem I can find is that you didn't mention the Grawp scene
Oho, there's a next chapter? -goes to read- |
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sintaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/09/03
well done, mr. romulus lupin!
that was undeniably one of the most riveting tales i've read of late. i cannot begin to relate how much i adore the intricacy you've taken in describing a short episode in the Hospital Wing. your ability to indulge your readers a peek into the character's soul is amazing. the thoughts and actions displayed are vivid and the inclusion of Antoine de St. Exupery is a fitting allusion to include in an excellent, seamless fic.
surely you've been published somewhere?
 well done!
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gadzooks, if i ever sprout half your talent i probably wouldn't be slacking off so much. |
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 Oh my... This is definitely one of the best fan fictions I have ever read... In fact, it was so good that for a moment Iforgot that it was a fan fiction!
First of all, I have to congratulate you for the way you write. You are really talented. The way you put everything up, how you recall events from the past books and specially how you describe the emotions... Just amazing.
Also, you must know that "The Little Prince" is one of my favorite books. I'm from Chile, so I read it in spanish, but I recognized all the quotes you used. The part with the fox was actually my favorite (I cried when I read it and I usually don't cry with books). All the analogy between Harry and Hermione and The Little Prince and his rose was incredible.
Finally, the way you describe what every character was thinking and feeling is a proof that you are a true Harry Potter fan and a true writer. You know the characters so well, you can almost think like them. I think that, if J.K read this, she'd be really impressed and proud.
Wowo, this is the longest revie I have ever read. Now I'm checking your other stories, and I must tell you that, from now on, you're one of my favorite authors.
Hope you'll keep it up.
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Hey! I just re-read this story and decided to review under my own account. I love your story, and I wish you would write more.
dreamcatcher |
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Loffed it...
Uncle Vernon, not Dudley |
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this chapter talks about the future right? About love and understanding and i think regret. I dont know what to say, truly your a great great author. |
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