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I was pleasantly suprised to find another chapter to this story. It's been at least a year since I visited portkey.org and Immediately thought of this story. Wonderful job. |
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This is one of my absolute favorite stories. You have a way of capturing the characters thoughts and feelings. Wonderful job. |
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I love this story! I admit, when I first saw the beggining of this chapter, I was rather hoiping that there would be more to this. But as I haven't seen your profile, maybe there is! |
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babs08Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/02/06
This is so beautiful. Is that the last instalation you're going to make to this fic. It'd be a shame if it was, for this truly is a great piece of work. |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/01/06
Wow, that is amazingly insightful and requiring of deep thought. It's so philosophical and hopeful - I love it!  |
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aww. very interesting story! but why did u pause it? i hope u update soon!  kip it up~ |
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Awesome story! Great job delving into Harry's thoughts and feelings in the events at the end of OotP. |
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AmyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/03/05
Great sequel! Very enjoyable. I appricated the use of The Little Prince as I love the book myself. |
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EmilyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/03/05
Wow. It simply was amazing, it made me cry. I myself have written and read fiction of this same sort but none can compare. Keep it up. Thank you. |
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GoldySigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/09/04
Wow. Just... wow. Incredible, perfect... gut-wrenching. Just... incredible. I'm speechless and teary and... have I said 'wow' yet?
The first chapter was incredible. You nailed Harry, his thoughts and his feelings for Sirius and Sirius' death. Brilliant way to have him consider if it had been Hermione in Sirius' place. Just... *sobs hysterically.* I could truly feel with him just how much Hermione means to him, what she's always meant to him, how badly he needs her. Perfect. Perfect.
You managed to nail both Hermione and Dumbledore in the second chapter, as well. Dumbledore's difficult to do, but I loved the way you structured his thoughts, to his realization that for Hermione it's. all. about. Harry.
Wonderful piece of fic. I truly hope that you continue it one day. |
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“As for the future, your task is not to forsee it, but to enable it.” That is so true.
I love this fic. I do hope you update soon.
Is this fic a Harry/ Hermione fic. |
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I do hope this is not where you plan to end this story. you could take this story a lot farther if you wanted to, its got great plots in it. I sincerly hope you take it farther, but if not it was great for a one shot fic. |
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JeenGrayUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/04
It's an absolutely amazing, incredibly talented piece of writing!!! So full of emotion: loyalty, passion, freindship, love. It makes my heart ache in compassion. It's so natural to see our heroes like this: they grow up, take responsibility and draw their strengh in eavh other. They're not 11 years old anymore.
It's one of the best fics I've ever read (and I had quite a few). |
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catloveUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/07/04
Oh I loved this combination with The Little Prince, since it's one of the most beautiful stories ever written  |
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catloveUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/04
This is a very sweet story. It's good to know he's found home. And ending like this would have been most comforting after OotP. |
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