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Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/01/07
Ohh, maybe Ginny's point of view... you know, rub it in her face (Harry's new discovery ) That would be an excellent idea lol... as all of your stories, I loved it
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/01/07
Oh, this was soo sweet! I was scamming through my reviews to see if I had missed any story's updates and found this... I was expecting it, and it was really good... maybe a little kiss wouldn't have been bad, hehe... great ending
 

lnkmstr10
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/01/07
Just as good as the first chapter!!! Your story has a different kind of romance..Its implied, just also obvious, but still not showy.. ok, maybe I'm not making any sense, but let me clarify: I LOVED IT!!
 

lnkmstr10
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/07
This is a great story! Well done. It is so cute! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
 

Silver Dragon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Great fic! I love fics like this. Though I can't help but think it'd be better if H/G never happened. I was expecting a kiss at the end. lol
Author Feedback: I SO agree with you...H/G should have NEVER happened

So I'm trying to live with it and rebuild the harmony in HP...;p

And do you really think there won't be a kiss? The fic is completed but it's not the last chapter in my story...

thanks a bunch!

 

Isabela
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
I loved this story... And can't wait for the next scenes!

I found Harry and Hermionein this fic so lovely and touching that I teared reading... =)
Author Feedback: Sorry for the tears, Isabella! hehe...but I really find myself feeling emotional at the end, when they are both talking about the exact same but neither of them know...Oh,good days, good loves...

thank you for reading, Isabela!
 

Animagus-Steph
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/01/07
Oh, /le swoon!

This was really sweet, and so much more developped than what I remember seeing. I loved how it wasn't [girlish giggle] "And then they snogged and then they lived happily ever after. THE END." Lord, I would have swum the Atlantic and slapped you to Sunday, girl! Good thing you've more sense than that.

This made me feel good. This was great, and I loved the exposition of Harry's dreams, how he pictured himself with Hermione, and just how absolutely wonderful it was. I could go on, dear, I certainly could. It was great. And you know it. I only wish I didn't stink so much as a beta to have not betaed this, too. I hope you'll still use me, because I adore your work. Absolutely adore it.

Steph
 

sad2bsony
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
This third installment of this story is heartwarming. I really like this series of Harry finding where his true heart lies and where Hermione is trying to be there for him even when she thinks she'll never have a chance with him. It's really good.
 

Animagus-Steph
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Oh my goodness, Bela, I have tears in my eyes. I simply have tears in my eyes. That was incredibly **bella** incredibly beautiful! I loved how you ended it. I loved how it flowed and how it had a pace and how it was /warm/, because it truly was a warm piece. I loved it. There's a reserve and you can feel how cautious these kids (because they really are just kids, teenagers--when I was 17, I was practicing for my drivers license!) are with everything--how the drop of a pin or the backfire of a car could just set them off.

I loved the essence of the Trio you portray here--The Bond and the synchrony and and and! Okay, I will stop now, you get the picture. However, I will be emailing you to catch you up on why I am such a meanie beta. The good news is that I have AP back (more on that later) and I am 100% ready to do your bidding again.

All my beta love, Bela!

Stephanie
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
i think i'd like to see how ginny takes it. lol. i dont like herm but i'd like to see what you do with her, you know. how she reacts as she realizes. lol. hopt to hear from you soon.
 

gurujerry
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
Fantastic, I've loved it all so do whatever you want. I hope they get together soon, but it is all so well written, I'm quite happy to wait
Author Feedback: I hope you don't have to wait too much! And you know what? I think I'm scared to reach some kind of final to this. I had the feeling that it's not going to be enough...I don't know, enough! lol.. (Which reminds me that I have no end yet... )

 

acoustics1220/melissa
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
Perhaps luna. That would be really interesting. Here's possibilities - Lupin, Tonks, Molly Weasley, one of the twins (interesting, huh?), or maybe Mr. Weasley. I think those would be cool...but now I'm wondering...have we gotten Ginny's POV? ohhh, the bench by the fence - second chapter right? ...or third, *shrug* YEAH.
Author Feedback: hey melissa, nice to see you again!

Mm.. I hadn't thought of Luna before, but I think she's going to enter the scene... I love Luna.

Mr. Weasley seems a great option, since JK sometimes reduces him to Molly's shadow...

And no, we haven0t gotten Ginny's yet... she was in the bench by the fence, but from Ron's...ok, I'm not sure, Ill have to check, lol.

thanks a bunch for commenting!
 

pottercrazy
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/07
This series of shorts are wonderful. And to answer your question, they are not badly written at all. Like another reviewer noted, I'm usually into the world you wrote that I skim through misspellings, etc. It was just that one snippet that put the brakes on my groove. I would like to see Ginny's point of view. Not necessarily during the wedding, but maybe during the horcrux hunt or during/after the battle (and get HER delusions stomped) Her reaction when Harry finally reveals who his inspiration to triumph was will be such a Kodak moment. Basically, I just want to see her skewered.
Author Feedback: Your last sentences is so shared, lol.

Ginny is definitely a candidate... should I torture her too much? mmm...don't know, don't know...
 

Lie
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/01/07
Uuuuh, I love it!
But again it ends before the happy end, without them knowing about the feelings of the other *sigh*... Will there be a sequel? I just can't get enough of it
Thanks for writing!
Lie
Author Feedback: hey!

Yes, there will be, so don't worry. Things begin to fall into place...

I'm glad you like it, and thanks to YOU for your nice words!

 

CathyD
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/01/07
*sigh* Wonderful. This chapter was just as great as the first one. (and who cares about any mistakes there could have been? I personally was enjoying reading it too much to even pay any attention to the possible mistakes. *shrugs* I think it's fine.)

That ending was terrific. I love the "Promise", and the fact that Hermione doesn't understand the look Harry gives her. God these two are just perfect together and *for* each other.

Please tell me there will be more of this. While this is great as a possible ending, I'm eager to read more of these little glimpses. I'd love to see more of James and Lily's POV in them as well. I really liked that from the first one.

Anyway, keep the great stories coming, even if they're not from this series of stories. I'd love to read more from you.

~Cat
 

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