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Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 21/09/06
Oh loved this story, just loved it. So perfect and the proposal was just right on the money so to speak.
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 15/09/06
Ah this is getting good he's going to propose isn't he on this is such a good story.Percy actualy helped someone. NOw that is scary. Love it so far
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 14/09/06
ohh my good he is goping to propose right it has to be that right i mena what else lol
 

Michelle_14_hpfan
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 14/09/06
I like this chapter. I like how you are hinting the Harry is going to propose to Hermione. I like how Harry figured it out. I hope you update soon!!
 

Michelle_14_hpfan
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 12/09/06
I like this chapter! It's about time they confused their feelings for each other. I like how Ginny delivered the note. I hope you update soon.
 

h/hr4ever11
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/09/06
great chapter!!! i'm so glad they're finally together! Update soon!! i love your story!
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/09/06
Ah love this tale so far. Can't wait to see what happens when they arrive at the Burrow. And its great that they are both teachers at their favorite school and that they finally admitted their feeling for each others.
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/09/06
hey thats it no more it was arther short i was specting a bit more on detials what happen between hary and mione now dodnt get me wrong i dont want the naughty bits i just want to know more and it was rather short or wasi lookng 4 more ????
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/09/06
This was a good chapter. I can't wait to see what else you ahev to write. It's pretty good already I can't wait to read more!

*%* Susanna *%*
 

feather0311
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 10/09/06
Great job on the new chapter I am so glad that you updated.
 

margie19142
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 10/09/06
I love how Harry told Hermione that he loved her, thinking she was asleep at the time. I'm glad that Hermione didn't let him know that she was awake until the words were out of Harry's mouth. For some reason, I think he would have chickened out if he knew she was awake. Now, I can't wait to read what happens next when they reach the Burrow! I hope the next chapter is posted quickly!
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 03/09/06
I loved this chapter. You're doing a great job of revamping the story! I can't wait to see what your going to have for his little confession time.... Okay I'll be sure to review next chapter!

*%* Susanna *%*
 

Harryluver05
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 30/08/06
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY !!!!! YOU NEED IT OUT !!!!! THIS IS A REALLY REALLY REALLY GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY !!! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES OUT !!! SOOO .... KEEP WRITING !!! AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT NOW !!!!
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 29/08/06
ohh my good what a great way to make her know ohh and bloody fred and George that prank was verry verry bad to make booom(as you said) the plaxce were ron and luna were its plain insae but any way i just hope harry gets to prank them back ore soemthing like that, i loved how you writen harry letter was sweet and ahhhh i cant say more that i loved it
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 29/08/06
What a clilffie and love this so far. Can't wait to see if they actually tell each other their feelings or not. Love this
 

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