pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/12/06
Nice fluff piece indeed. Btw, I do hope you update the P-G Rivalry one day within the next decade. I really liked that fic. |
Author Feedback: Hi. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I've updated P-G Rivalry since this review, so hopefully you enjoyed that chapter if you checked it out (in case you haven't, you should!!!!). Well, I'm glad you like my work and thanks for all the reviews you've given me!
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alviceUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/06
i love a harry like that !!  He's so... so hargh !!! I want him too ^^ lol.
great fic !!  |
Author Feedback: Haha, I want him too!!! Wow...I just said I want a character from a story...  . Lol, but hey, it's awesome that you liked it! It was just a quick idea to try something new. But thanks for the review!!!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
I really liked it. It was adorable and very very sweet. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Awesome, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
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Author Feedback: Haha, I don't LOVE Chris, it's just an attraction, lol. Yeah, you're getting hit by the way.
Lol, you want me gay, just admit it. Don't worry, I'm staying straight! Yeah yeah, I know you're gonna have a blast. I'm jealous. Sorry about that, it was just too easy! No dog bite! No! Haha, yeah, I'll continue! Thanks for the 3rd review, lol, please, no more! People are going to think I'm using you to boost my review count, lol. I'll talk to ya later. Peace!
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o0o0... brookes a lesbian!!!! hahhaha I'm so gonna get hit for this... i love u, dont hurt me.. i want to LIIVVEE... I'm churro the wonderdog... BEWARE dont hurt me |
Author Feedback: Lol, Em, you WISH I was a lez, but sorry, I've already got my eye on a guy (sucky rhyme, I know). But yeah, you sound like Good Charlotte "I Just Wanna Live!" Lol. Anyway, have a sweet time in Florida without me! BEWARE my ass! The only thing I've got to beware of is you making the moves on me! Haha, but thanks for the review!
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This is so cute! I have never heard this song, but I just adore the meaning! |
Author Feedback: Hey, what's up? You should check it out, it's a pretty good song. I'm kinda sick of it now because I listened to it over and over when writing this for inspiration, lol. Anyway, thanks for the review!
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Damn homie, it's even better than i expected, haha! w00t w00t! Wow, i had no idea you were gonna make it like this, but hey, im not complaining, I ADORE IT! You kick ass, other than saying u hope i drown in florida, which i now dislike you for, but hey... i sed you'd get hit by a bus, so we're even! Haha, I really love this story, THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT FOR ME!! Yeah, all you reviewers r jealous RITE?! yeah, you wish u had a kick ass frend like this, DONT U! HAHA I BEAT U ALL!! MWUAHAHAHA... *cough*
continue, only after i come back tho... so noone gets to see it bfore me, lol.. im jp. CONTINUE, which i know u will  |
Author Feedback: Haha, well nigga, I'm glad it reached your approval. You better not be complaining, I made sure I got this done before you went to Florida, which I am still insanely jealous over, lol! Come on, you know I don't want you to drown, that wouldn't be funny....it makes much more sense for you to get eaten by a shark, now THAT'S how someone can go out, lol. Kidding. Haha, it's no problem, it was fun to write, not to mention I wanted to show that I could write "cute" stories...you know who I'm talking about, lol. When you say my reviewers are jealous about the kickass friend thing, I just KNOW you're referring to ME as the kickass friend, right, lol. Anyway, yeah, I'll probably write a follow up chapter sometime down the line, Churro, the wonderdog...and I will NOT BEWARE!!! So yeah, I'll um...keep talking to you on IM. Stay righteous homie, and thanks for the lovely review!
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P.S. I like you so much, I'm gonna give you a thumb's up! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
Hi, KirstiR here. My blasted computer won't let me sign in lately. Sigh.
Anyway, very sweet story. I for one am perfectly happy to ignore HBP, Super-Barbie-Ginny, and any hint of R/Hr. Let Ron remain the comic relief and stay away from Hermione! I loved the way your Harry refused to give up until he found out why Hermione was so upset. And then those last paragraphs? *happy smile* I loved teh fluff. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Hey KirstR, what's up? Haha, computers can be pretty dumb sometimes!
Thanks, I tried to make it sweet and cute. Lol, me too! To me, HBP NEVER happened, and I won't write a story that even has that happen in the past. I refuse! Ha, that reminded me of a anit-drug commercial just now...the girl is like "I refuse, I refuse, I REFUSE to be another drug abuser, teen statistic!" or something like that, lol. I haven't seen it on the telly for a LONG time...  . Do you know what commerical I'm talking about? Anyway, sorry 'bout that, couldn't resist. So yeah, I wouldn't dishonor Barbie by calling Ginny Super-Barbie-Ginny (Barbies are one of my favorite past times, lol.) Ron is best friend comic relief, that's it. Of course Harry wasn't going to give up! Hermione is his world! Do you think it sounded okay? I'm not a fluff-writer, so I'm always a bit self-conscious when I have to write a part like that. But anyway, thanks for the feedback, you're awesome Kirsti!
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SchokkiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
Well, that was a wonderful piece of work!  A very cute and lovely one-shot! And as always well-written!  I like it!^^
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Author Feedback: Hey, what's up? Lol, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I realized I didn't have a "cute" story, so I had to try it! Thanks for the review!!!
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What a beautiful piece of writing. You have a talent. I'm going to read your other now, due to how you have written this story. It's a masterpiece. |
Author Feedback: Wow, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I like to think I have a decent talent for writing, though I know I need to work on it a little better. Haha, this story definitely isn't my masterpiece, lol. But hey, I hope you like my other stories! I reccommend reading "The Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry" if you haven't already, it's my "masterpiece" that I'm working on, a lot of people seem to like it. But don't forget to review to let me know what you tihnk of my other stories, I'll be looking out for them! Thanks for this review by the way!
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that was cute. i'm actually surprised harry didn't start runing around screaming "hermione's my girl!!!!!" (and for a moment i saw him running around like a chicken with no head. lol, sorry, i was just talking to my sister about a chicken and a video game. long story   )
ron kinda got on my nerves, though. hermione DID have a point - he forgot quite a bit of stuff but when hermione forgot just ONE letter of "chudley cannons" he went psycho... yay for harry and hermione  |
Author Feedback: Thanks, it was my first try at something "cute." Haha, yeah, that WOULD have been funny if Harry had done that! I almost wish I would have put it in there now! Lol, I bet THAT is an interesting story. . .haha. I made Ron a prat, I couldn't resist, it helped in my story! Yeah, he went a bit psycho, lol. Haha, YAY for Harry and Hermione! So yeah, thanks for the review!!!!
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tubsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
I think that this is a great One-shot. You filled out the story nicely and it went greatly with the song. I hope that you get the Potter V. Granger Rivalry written soon. |
Author Feedback: Heyhey Tubs, what's been up? Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't satisfied the first time I wrote it, it just seemed too basic, so I went back and reworked some of it, adding stuff here and there. I know it wouldn't hurt to go back into it again and make it better, but I wanted to get it posted for Emily before she left for Florida tomorrow, and plus, I've got other stories that need updated, like The Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry!!! Haha, so this story just reach a satisfactory, lol. But hey, thanks for reading, and for the review!
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aw the video for "You Are the World" always makes me tear up. Not sure why. This was sweet! |
Author Feedback: Lol, I've heard it had a sweet video to it, but I've never seen it. I probably will sometime this weekend though because I'm going to my mom's house and they watch CMT all the time. Haha, thanks for reading and for the review!
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"I love you too. You're my world."???!!!!!
Let's just say that this fanfic was horribly cheesy. You need to be a bit more realistic and less dramatic.
Sublety is essential. This story needs serious revising. The concept behind the fanfic is good though. I just think you should work with a beta. |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. I mean, the whole idea for this story was that Hermione was Harry's world, so those lines worked for it. I think all fluff is cheesy to an extent. I dunno why you thought it was so dramatic, I didn't. I liked it, and so did other people, so it works for me.
Yes, I know subtlety is essential in writing. This was going to be a simple one-shot, nothing I wanted to be working on for days, and nothing I wanted to be all long and drawn out. It would have taken too long if I was too subtle. I've got other stories I want to work on, this was just something quick and fun to see if I could write "cutsie" stories. I doubt I'll be revising it, it's not important. Plus, others seem to like it enough. But thanks for the concerns.
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AlanaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
it was incredibly cute and sweet... Definately surprising for something you claimed as your first fluff piece. Hermione seemed a bit off to me, but it fit right into place with the story and overall it was beautiful.
I absolutely loved harry... What a sweet heart! |
Author Feedback: Haha, I'm not big on fluff, sometimes it's good though. Yeah, this is my first "fluff" piece. I've written small paragraph-long pieces in my angst stories for flashbacks and such, but not a whole chapter. I dunno, I've always thought Hermione as someone who wants recognition for her hard work, because she always wants attention in class, so I thought this would work, her feeling this way. Haha, yeah, Harry is just too sweet in this story, I love it! But I really think it works for him! But hey, thanks for the review!!!
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