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theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 08/10/09
oh dear.. who in the world is this new character? Seamus is back! yay

i feel so bad for Draco poor guy has to go through so much all alone..

but i'm very curious as to why you put Ric in here all of a sudden..

Are we getting close to Ginerva's vision about Lavender, Dean & Ron? it hasn't changed yet again right? i'm so psyched to read about it!

i'm trying to read the chapters really slowly so by the time i'm caught up with you, you will have updated a new chapter soon!

keep up the great work!

- theraginHPfanatic
Author Feedback: *lol* Ah yes, the introduction of Ric! hehe ... Oh, wait til you get to the next one! *lmao*

*Seamus!flag* I love Seamus

I don't feel that I introduced him suddenly, but since the story's already going on in my head, I know what's going to happen, and readers don't ... so maybe I did!

Sorry I'm taking so long to update, I hope you're enjoying the chapters!

Thanks again for all of your reviews!
 

theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 02/10/09
Okay oh. my. god. First of all, and i'm pretty sure i've said this before.. but i LOVE the length of your chapters! i love that they don't end like short stories, and that I never seem to lose interest when i'm in the middle of one of them!

about the story.. oh dear god! soo many things to handle.. rion.. neville.. the club.. draco and her.. and aaah it just keeps getting crazy!

but i'm still lovin it to the max. i can't wait to catch up with the rest of the chapters!

keep up the great work!

- theragingHPfanatic
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm really glad that you love the chapter length! ^_^ That's why they're so long and take so long to write...

Haha ... Hope it's a good-crazy!!

Glad you're still reading!

Thanks, I will!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/09/09
Are you a Latin student, or a former Latin student? I'm a Latin Student, and I notice that yours is very good. And I love this story, it makes me happy!
Author Feedback: No, I'm not a Latin student, unfortunately! I just use an online translator, and a very long document of Latin words that I like to mash together

Thanks for your review, and I hope you loved the rest of the story too!
 

theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/09/09
*gasp* Neville.. and.. wow! I am LOVING the twists and turns in this story.. I keep saying I can't put it down and I honestly can't.

I had to make myself stop reading because I was giving myself a headache looking at the computer too long!

But like I said, this is beyond amazing. I can't wait to see how it all starts between Draco and Ginny.

Ohh.. this is sooo exciting!

As always, keep up the good work!

- theragingHPfanatic
Author Feedback: Hehe ... I love Neville! He's awesome! ^_^

Hope you're not getting any more headaches! Try and rest!

Thanks again for reviewing, I really appreciate it!
 

theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/09/09
Oooooh my goodness!

That was I think the best of her visions so far. What's going on with her and Dracoo!? Aaah.. this story is going to make me have dreams about this!

This is amazingly written. I can't believe how incredibly well its telling the story.

And since I know that I can't keep myself from reading the story much longer, I'm gonna get right back to it and keep going.

It really excites me that this story is still in progress! Can't wait till I catch up and can't wait till you finish the story!

I'm really really excited!
Author Feedback: Thanks! I really enjoyed writing that vision, it was great!

I really do try to tell the story well. I can usually see every part of it in my head, and write it as close to it as possible!

I'm writing the next chapter (24th) now!
 

theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/09/09
Wow, I'm loving this story so incredibly much and I'm only done 3 chapters! How awesome is that. Once again, I like how you've incorporated magic in so many different ways without pushing it too much. And its awesome how you're setting up the story for future events!

You definitely have a way with words

Keep up the awesome great work, can't wait to read more!
Author Feedback: That is pretty awesome!

Thanks, I wanted to do something different with my story, and keep it original too!

I'm really pleased Thanks again
 

theragingHPfanatic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/09
Wow..

I'm honestly so amazed. I've just finished reading ONE chapter of this story and I'm already beyond addicted to it!

Lol so in all honesty, the fact that there's 23 or so more chapters to go, and the story is still in progress makes me extremely happy

You are an amazing writer, and you have an excellent way of keeping your readers nibbling on their nails to see what's to happen next.

Great work! Keep it up!

- theragingHPfanatic
Author Feedback: Hi!

Thanks for all your reviews!

Hehe, glad to see you're addicted to my story and love it that much!

I must admit, I do take a while to update each chapter, but I put a lot of work into them, so I hope it's worth it!

Thanks for saying I'm an amazing writer! I try my best

And thanks again for reviewing!
Hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 08/09/09
ohh wow as always so good u take ur tiem but its ohhh so woth it and lovethe hole intraccion of everyone though imnust say that i dislike the hole idea of hermione being meant to ginny i know its just one selfish thought but hey i aways had a soft spot of her and now her being the one to tell the profet bout a vampire in school its no good pleas help her have a change in her haert soona dn that she and harry may have a god end
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing!

I'm glad the wait is worth it

I'm sorry you dislike the idea of Hermione being mean to Ginevra... I'm not sure if I can do anything for her now. She chose her path, but then, the future always changes!

Thanks again for reviewing
 

jessechick
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 07/09/09
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i love this story. im glad to see that ur still working on it. i cant wait til ur next post.
 

ElvenPrincess
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/06/09
Do you know how long it's taken me to get through all these 22 chapters? 5 Days!! Yes, 5 whole days! Every evening I've been reading 3/4 chapters, and only now have I reached the end.

And must I say, it is amazing!! I honestly love this so far. It's always worrying when you see a story like this at first, as it's always very sterotypical and boring, but I'm glad to say that yours is nothing like that! I am always eager to keep the pages turning and always eager to see what happens with Ginny & her friends.

One tiny thing which gets to me a bit, is the familiarity at which Ginny refers to her teachers with, like calling Dumbledore, Albus, I don't know why but it just doesn't sit well with me.

Did you start to post this on FF.net? I swear I started reading it on there, and got up to the chapter where Ginny/Lily slaps Lupin, but I don't know if you every updated it past there!

I am however, so glad that I found it again, I love what you're doing, and I love the originality to your story. Well done and keep it up!!
xx
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and reviewing

5 days?! Wow! I hope you slept and ate during that time!

I'm really really glad that you think it's amazing and not stereotypical and boring!! ^_^

I figured Ginevra would be familiar with Albus because of the events of her first year (I always thought that she'd have to have some sort of contact with him after it and tell him exactly what happened, and that's where the familiarity comes from.)

Yes, it's on ff.net as well ... and I'm still adding the chapters to it - they're added first, then these ones straight afterwards! www.fanfiction.net/u/514414/

I'm glad that you found it again as well!

Thanks again for reviewing, I appreciate it!
 

MARK'S BABY
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 02/06/09
That was great!!!!! You never sease to amaze me with your story telling.......im glad ginerva didn't kill anyone she is just a very 'just' person
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing

Glad that you thought it was great, and that I can still amaze you!

I'm glad she didn't kill anyone either ... Don't think she could have lived with herself if she had!

Thanks again for reviewing
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 01/06/09
ohhh my god it toke u 4-ever to update but hey as alwasy worth waiting 4 im really happy that u didn put these fic in hitus cause now a days more and more people are doing that i must say that thinking of draco with fangs wow im so blushing right now jajaja , just one quick thought its seams that draco is the onbly one being afected withthere blood change but will ginny in the future nave some velan traits i dontk now like dazziling people or something as random as that?
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing

I know it took a while, sorry for that! But I'm glad it was worth the wait

I do take a while to update, but I won't put it on hiatus unless I'm stopping writing all together (which will be never!)

Haha, Draco with fangs does sound very good, doesn't it?! hehe

It's a possibility that Ginevra will be affected ... But then, maybe not

Thanks again for reviewing!
 

frecklegirl87
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 31/05/09
Awww, yay you updated! Your story is so incredible, just absolutely amazing! Still don't like Virginia but I guess theres a reason for that as well. I loved Ginevra's reaction to Virginia's reaction when she chose her, rather hilarious, as a take that kind of reaction. Oh and I loved the part where Xavier gets to see his sister, that was funny and the comment of his towards Draco was hilarious. Great job on the chapter! Can't wait to see more! I'd describe each part I loved but then this review would be a novel.
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing

I'm so very glad that you think my story's incredible and amazing!

Hehe no one likes Virginia, it's great! *lol*

Virginia was chosen for a reason, which will be revealed at a later date

Julianne and Xavier have a great sibling relationship, and it's such fun to write them! I'm actually writing two spin offs that involve how they become Veela and Vampire respectively ... It's fun to write in a different era

I'll try to update soon!

Thanks again for reviewing! (Novel-reviews are always good! )
 

fallingmonkey
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 31/05/09
Nice chapter, vixen. It's very interesting that Draco is a Vampire/Veelan hybrid... Will Ginevra also become a hybrid? Or does it only work one way, since vampires are turned? The punishments doled out to Dean, Lavender, and Ron are fitting. It's nice to see that Lavender was able to get over her teenage jealousy and see Ginevra for who she was, although it's a shame that she couldn't have seen past it before everything happened. Update soon!
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing as always! ^_^

Think the hybrid only works one way, but there's always the possibility of Ginevra becoming a hybrid as well!

So glad you liked their punishments ... I took a long time working them out, and was finally satisfied after a lot of changes!

It is disappointing about Lavender's teenage views, but she may just make it up to you in the next chapter!

I'll try to update soon! Thanks again for reviewing!
 

frecklegirl87
Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 30/04/09
Awww poor Ginny! And Draco as well, having to give her up like that, couldn't have been easy, though the butterfly scene of them becoming engaged was really sweet and beautiful! Sorry I haven't reviewed your previous chapters, I've been reading this story now for 24 hours straight, well minus a few for sleeping but ya get it. Your story is amazing, it takes me out of the real world and just engulfs me into another, it's extremely relaxing. Not many are able to be so good that it just pulls you into the world without even knowing it! GREAT JOB!!!!! Can't wait to see more!!!
 

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