*sob* My heart is breaking for draco... *sniff* didnt quite get it at first but then i did.... i loved it no matter how sad and sobby-ish it was ... lol... *wipes tears from eyes* beautiful im gonna go read you other storys now... get all the possible crying out all at once you know? good work keep it up.... *sniffle*

My God. I have never seen emotions portrayed in such a wonderful manner...it's been a while since a fic has brought tears to my eyes, but this one did just that, and almost more It will be recced on Sugar'n Spice for sure

This story was amazing!! I cried so hard at the end when Draco is thinking about how he dreamed Ginny would walk in the door one day and how he waited for her!! You did such a fantastic job on this story... definatley the best fan fic I have ever read!!! Keep up the excellent work!!

xoxo Catianna xoxo

P.S. This last part was so well written that I had to quote you on it...
The night drew on as a broken man, plagued by war and a love lost, cried himself to sleep in his own bubble of time. Life would never play a more ironic tune bitterer than nor as sweet as the lament did it play for him alone. For that was what he would forever be. Alone with nothing but a ghost to keep him alive.

why the hell isn't this rated as angst? I did NOT need a cry, thank you.

The reveiw prior was my previous and I forgot to rate. If I could give you something more I would.

You've really brought the horrors of war home and made it so believeable. I'm a nurse in the Army reserves but I don't think I'd ever be able to describe it in the way you've just done. I love how you ended it. Although we all hope for that happy ending, life isn't always fair.

Poor Draco but again, very realistic.

You really do deserve more reviews. You put a lot of thought and emoition in your stories. I can't wait to read more of your work and will be on the lookout for any new postings.

All right. I often profess being the hardest bitch to crack, but you cracked me. This fic made me cry. I'm not even that fond of D/G anymore, but something about the ending here made my eyes sting. You're evil.

Brilliantly done.

Cheers,
Sing

Hello, this fic was recommended here: http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=3938.

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OMG!!!!!you're so mean!!!! I got tears in my eyes, gee, thas great, if you use original characters, it'd make a great book!! keep on please!!!!!!!oh , how about writing an alternate version of this story(they don't go to the war)? is ginny really dead?Draco is soooooo nice,
i have to make a special comment about the paragraph when Draco thinks about deaths, that no matter what side they were, they all are now in theirs eternal sleep
you did got the verve of the feelings of someone who goes to a war
congratulations
mary

Oh my God. Why hasn't anyone reviewed this. Smashed Sunshine, I can never get enough of your writing, I can never get enough of the way you play the emotions of your characters, their thoughts, their hopes.

God, you write so beautifully, I don't think I've ever bawled my eyes out for a fanfiction. Everything is described so perfectly, the metaphors, the words, ugh, I can't even envy you for your skill, I'm just glad that I can read it. I'm reading this while I listen to David Usher *teary smile* one of his depressing ones too.

I feel so torn right now. It's just fiction I tell myself, but just wanted you to know, your writing really touched me. Their relationship was so incredibly beautiful it hurt that they couldn't continue it. It felt so real, so unbelievably f-ing real I had a hard time believing it wasn't.

Thanks for sharing this, I'm glad you do, once I was drawn into this, I hated that it ended, I didn’t want it to end, I wanted him to be happy - the distress, pain, sorrow relieved. Then I realize nothing’s perfect, nothing ends the way you want it to. Put things into perspective for me. A deeper look into writing and I look forward to seeing more of your writing.

- J