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Sum1
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
it was a nice short story,

but i found it weird that they supposedly had sex while she was pregnant??
Author Feedback: Oh there's nothing wrong with it. Pregnant ladies can certainly make love well into their pregnancy, almost up to their due date from what I recall reading. And Hermione's not terribly pregnant here, just enough to make standing difficult.

If a couple is comfortable with a healthy sex life, as I would imagine the Potters are, then I see nothing wrong with making love under the circumstances.

Thanks for the concern, though. And the review.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/06
Hee hee, Ahh... silly Harry! I can so picture him giving himself a bad boy makeover just to please Hermione. LOL, I bet they'll have fun getting that gel out.
Author Feedback: Anything to please his Hermione. That's our Harry for you!

Oh and they did have fun!!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

ravenous19
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/06
Well, I can safely say Harry's lost the plot. Poor Harry, having a mid-life crisis in his twenties isn't a good sign. At least he'll always have Hermione to make him see the facts.

Great job, completely loved it.
Keep it up, and take care, Ash
Author Feedback: Well, I wouldn't call it a midlife crisis ... more a trying to be something he's not, just to "make his wife happy." That's our Harry!

Thanks so much for reviewing!
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/06
Very, very cute. I love Harry's insecurity and how Hermione knows him so well that she reassures instead of chastising.
Author Feedback: Yeah, poor Harry. But at least he's got Hermione to correct him when he needs it!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

Schokki
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
I needed a laugh today... so thanks for sharing this little fic and making my day better! *wink*
Author Feedback: Glad I could make you laugh! That makes my day!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

mysterium26
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
lol, I LOVE that song. Or maybe I loved it so much cuz I had a fatty crush on Nick Carter...Anyway, this is a cute little one-shot and I'm glad to see something posted from you. It's been a while since I've read your stuff, and it's too bad you're unable to update Love of lifetime more often, but we all understand the work/life thing. But keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: Ah, I was more of an Nysyc girl. But I enjoyed BSB songs too. I don't even know where I heard the song, but I remember loving it and this came to mind.

Thanks for understanding the work/life thing. Somedays I don't! *sigh*

Thanks so much for reviewing!
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
Aww, very cute. As soon as I saw the title, my brain went into 90's boy band mode and I started singing the song. And that was even before I was sure it was the BSB song. Anyway, absolutely adorable. Of course she wouldn't want him to change! They are too perfect together just the way they are! Lovely, lovely, lovely!
Author Feedback: Too perfect together, indeed!! (And I'm glad you liked the song nod LOL)

Thanks for reviewing!
 

Becca_Angelic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
*giggles* That was really, really cute. I loved it. Ha, Harry trying to be a bad boy... *snickers*
Author Feedback: Yeah, it's a pretty funny picture!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

barby-chile
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
Aww, so cute! Harry and his insecurities, but always his Hermione be there to show him how beautiful he is. And the baby, I wasn't expecting for it, was a nice surprise. Thank you for the story, I love it.
Author Feedback: Yeah, I have a feeling that Harry's insecurities, but that's why he has Hermione!

And I liked the baby surprise. Surprised me when writing it. lol

Thanks for the review!!
 

Nice
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
lol. i love it especially when she said she has to work on him so more. h/h at another wonderful moment. just great
Author Feedback: I doubt Hermione will ever be finished working on our Harry.

Thanks for reviewing!
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
Author Feedback: Well hello there, destroyerdrt! Been too long!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
a little advise, mentine that she's pregnant somewhere twards the beginning next time. otherwise interesting story.
Author Feedback: Well, to be honest, that wasn't the original plan. It just kinda wrote itself in. I liked the surprise for myself and decided to include it. I kinda like it when it's a surprise.

Thanks for the review.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
That was too funny. Very cute. I can't imagine Harry with gelled up hair and an earring.
Author Feedback: Oh, just try to picture Harry like that! It's a laugh!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

tiger111991
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
Well that was srtanly funny! I could just see the look on Hermione's face! Great job! I love it! I can't wait to read more of your work!---Tiger111991
Author Feedback: Why thank you! I certainly hope there will be more of my work for you to read!

Thanks for reviewing!
 

Mione_Potter7271
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
That was a great one shot, really good and funny also very sweet, i love how Hermione tells him that she wants him and finally he realizes that, they are so cute together

Great job and i hope that you keep writing, you are a agreat writer and your ffcs are really really good
Author Feedback: Yeah, our poor Harry. Sometimes it takes him a few times to get it. But Hermione still loves him!

Thanks for both the review and the wonderful compliments. Here's hoping my muse comes back!
 

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