Nice I'd like to read more about the fellatio sperm sucking and pussy licking as a favor would make me feel a lot better.

OMG! I liked the story and the drama that you put on it, but you put hermione like a whore and she is supposed to be one special girl for harry anyways good job.

wow/. that was so sweet. it was truely them. i liked his response, as you said, it was Harry. great job!

Awwwwwwwww... that was so cute! And VERY sweet. I don't think that i've ever read a fic in which Mione makes the offer. In any case, it was very good.

~LK1512~

beautiful - that's all I really have to say. simply lovely

you are great with these one-shot stories especially the juicy stuff...keep on writing

Oh that was brilliant! It's funy to watch them find each other and themselves at the same time. I'm such an H/Hr shipper. Thanks for a great read.

that was a sweet fic. i really liked it. and you're right... it wouldn't really be harry if he gave a decloration of love after one night. he normally doesn't really understand what he feels. he kinda tends to have to work with it first. lol. But anyway, you did a great job.

*sniff sniff* That was so adorable! Well, adorable because I can't think much of a better word, but it was really lovely!

lovely just what i needed... great fic!! such love and craing.. truely lovely
dysfunctionalspirit

I found it interesting that you didn't dwell too much on Hermione's unrequited feelings, as is typical for this type of fic. I think it works well though for her character. Hermione is such a strong, independent girl that I find it kind of annoying when she gets turned into the weepy "he doesn't love me back" girl for all the stories that follow this genderal plot. She still has hope that he could love her one day, but she's ok with the current situation. Keep up the good work. Till the next one.

I liked it, as usual, you're one of my favorite writers. I love the way Harry is such an innocent boy sometimes, even after what he did with Hermione, And the way Hermione's always guiding him and showing him that she's what he needs, I wish JK would do the same

Aww, that was adorable! And fluffy! And hot! LOL! I really like how you made Harry awkward with words and made him and Hermione seem very teenage like, you know? I have a feeling that's what you were going for. Duh. But seriously, there are a lot of fics out there that make Hermione and Harry seem so much more adult than they already are. It's nice to see a change. But anyways, I absolutely loved this one-shot! You should do more like this!
Keep up the amazing work!
~Glitterfairyxoxo

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet, and true to the awkwardness of a first time.

Awww...love the flangst.
It was very much in character for Hermione to want to give everything of herself, only to help him. And Harry's bumbling confession--absolutely perfect.