shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/07
What can I say ?
I'm speechless ... you fics are truly amazing.
Can't imagine what I would do without you ....
Thanks for all this stuff ... keep writing ! |
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zihrioSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/06/07
Hahah. This is wicked. I'm more of a HP/GW and a RW/HG fan but this is good. =) |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/07
Oh, this was fantastic. The bit about "Hermione's girly parts' made me snigger. And Harry dreaming that scene in the kitchen? That was even better! The Horcruxes being the power he knows not was a very good idea, and the ending was, as always, perfect. |
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Ok, I enjoy your fics, it was funny even! And there is some reality with all the horcurx thing, i like it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
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SochSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/07
Nice one-shot. You get a lot through in a short space without it feeling rushed or cramped. You avoid clichee, too, and that's pretty important.
It wasn't *quite* as sexy as I was hoping for, but it wasn't a coldfish, either. I'd like to read more of the story, because I think you could take it from here and bring it somewhere very sexy.
A very good job, overall. Thank you. |
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Very nice. Very typical, but still with your own originality. I love the personalities you brought out in Harry and Hermione. He's trying so hard to be a gentleman, and she's loving watching him fail miserably. It's too bad there aren't going to be sequels, but I like just the way it is. Keep writing! |
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That was great!  Actually made a lot of sense with the destroying of the horcruxes. Great idea! And you really tied it in with the books with Hermione being jealous of cho with the tone and smiling when Harry and Ginny got together. |
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Okay, first off, I very well enjoyed the fact that you almost intended to put your own view on the facts about Voldemort and stuff - if that was what you were doing. Anyway, everything in the books, and everything in your story fitted perfectly together. I couldn't believe it. This is, by far, one of the best stories. I also love how you kept sort of teasing the reader for when Harry and Hermione would get together. It was all very well, perfect. Keep up the wonderful work!  I give this a ten. Straigh up, ten! |
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Very nice...frustrating, with the dream sequences turning out to be...well, just dreams. Twice. But great. Well done. Thanks. |
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Awww... why end it there, it was so cute...
You should write a horcrux hunting story.. I'd love to read a really good one, which I am sure u'd be able to write. |
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 The story was wonderful and I am sure that Harry had a very great birthday!! |
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Wow you have point with the identity of RAB and about the locket that they could not open in book 5. Your story gave me a lot to think about. |
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This was a great one-shot. You've made your Harry very grown up in this, but you still put things in there to remind the reader that he is still young and not as experienced as he seems. Great job! |
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Well, as always, love the fic. However, this line:
Harry shook his head, his decision made. “I don’t really know what’s going on here, Hermione, but I know that I couldn’t bear to break your heart…but I could live with breaking hers. That means something, doesn’t it?”
a tad bit douche-baggy for my taste, but I guess it's understandable. I mean, it is his way of expressing his feelings for Hermione, but somehow I can't really picture him saying something so...heartless about Ginny and her feelings. However, it is your fic, and this is just my opinion. Can't wait for your next story. Till then. |
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