I like this story, and I'm going to keep reading. I have one BIG criticism trhough. Some of this reads like you were writing with your nose in a thesaurus.

"Even though he gave the impression of idle boredom, in his gait and his facial expressions, his tedious mind was always operating. After rifling through vast forests of paper, he felt a tough, arduous headache threatening to interrupt his work."

I would have just thought you were trying too-hard to mix up your vocabulary, but I suspect an over used thesaurus because you misused "tedious."

You don't need to reach for language. The story will stand on it's own. Keep your writing comfortable.

Otherwise I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work.

Wow, Harry with a Mazda...that's really wierd but insanely cool at the same time - ha ha.

This story is one of the best I have ever read. I've been around and have read a bunch of fics, but this one is near the top of my list. Great emotions and an awesome ending. Good job, 5 stars!

What i like about your story is the fact that ypu did not go for the usual the bad guys will always get what they deserved. Harry's decision to let moreolon (did i spell it right? can't quite remember his name) go as long as he let leave Ron alone is a realistic way of looking at things I mean the guy has the capacity to make their life a living hell. Of course the H/Hr is also terrific

awwwww let ron be a gay or something and theiur marriage a sham. lol! and let ginny die in the next chapter. LOL!

Ok, I liked this story a lot. Like someone else said, your take on post-Voldemort and Harry's fall and redemption are brilliantly written. I just think you rushed it a bit at the end. I know you said it was a short fic and the pace had to be fast but you really weren't kidding! I kinda got to the end and thought, "huh? That's it?" But apart from that, very nicely done. It's very rare that you read an original H/Hr fic (I hate to admit it, but it's true).

Are there any plans for a sequel? Or something from Ron's point of view? As much as I dislike the boy, it would be nice to get his perspective

Ron's a rather vile hypocrite, isn't he? Good story - I particularly like that bit with Harry tied to a chair, for some perverted reason. Anyway, well done.

Aww, What a sweet ending! I like how it's the end of the story but the beginning for Harry & Hermione. Well done, sweetie!

Wow just wow, I love intelligent stories and this one had a really interesting plot and was perfectly written

A wonderful chapter; I especially liked the last few lines of it!

Well, I hope there still is another chapter though this seems to be a fitting ending!^^

And what about Harry Potter and the Riddle Chamber? When is there going to be a new posting? =)

This sounds like a great story. I like the style of your writing. It is very in-depth and much more complex than some of the writing I have read over here and on FF.net. Nice job. Can't wait to read more of the story. Like how the plot is unfolding....

Hey, that was really good! Thank you for not putting all the flowery speech that seems to accompany H/Hr fics!! ^_^ I really liked the ending it was perfect. You had great imagery especially during the storm in last chapter! All in all it was a great story! Can't wait to read more from you!

Ohhh....an affair! Can't wait to find out what's going on! I really like your take on the aftermath of the downfall of Voldemort. Sometimes I wonder if Harry really cares about the wizardling world. I wouldn't if I were him. ^_^

another great chapter. i just love the fact they can be together thats more than enough for me

How I did love post-Hogwarts stories. They gave me hope about H/Hr no matter what the original author or the world had said!
^_^

That was an excellent story. I love your writing style, although I feel it could have been fleshed out a bit more, possibly making it a five-parter. The part about Harry being paid off seemed a bit odd as well. I know he's purposefully OOC, but that didn't ring true with any part of his character in my view.

Regardless though, it was thoroughly enjoyable. I especially loved the kiss scene and Ron/Harry's confrontation. Thank you for sharing.