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Island Girl

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Tank03
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
Thanks for this story. It was just a good combination of fluff and drama and really was an entertaining read.
Thanks for sharing.
Author Feedback: You're welcome! And thanks for reading and dropping a note. ^_^ Glad you liked the story.
 

barby-chile
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
Beautiful story, I'm literally melted while read it. I really could feel Hermione's emotions, and Harry was so cute with her, taking all the time she needed to clarify the things. I enjoyed this fic absolutely, thanks for it.
Author Feedback: Thanks. I think I was indeed aiming for "melt," especially with the tropical heat. Hehe!
 

Hit Wizard
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
This was such a beautiful, sweet story. You have such a wonderful understanding of Harry's and Hermione's inner emotions and you just write them so well. And you are such a versatile writer being able to write different style stories all equally as well. Brilliant job.
Author Feedback: Aw, thanks. A break from the drama is refreshing, yes? ^_^ It feels good to write Harry and Hermione in a relatively relaxed situation.
 

ginger25
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
This story was so sweet. I love the way you write Harry and Hermione, they are so endearing. I hope you will consider writing more post-Voldemort fics!
Author Feedback: Hehe. That's the plan so far! I'm thoroughly sick of Moldyshorts, which is why after I kill him off in another story of mine, that's gonna be it for him!
 

vulcanarcher
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
Lovely little vignette! It says both absolutely nothing and everything at once. It seems to be normal, but it's not because it's Harry and Hermione. You've done a good job of showing how they are both normal in their own ways.
Author Feedback: Thanks! That's exactly what I want them to be. Two normal... wizards. Lol! But yeah, glad I got that part to work.
 

Mary6707
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
How sweet and lovely! I am always so happy when they finally get together. They are so wonderful together. You made Harry do good here, very good!
Author Feedback: Eh, I figured the boy shouldn't always be clueless, eh? Teehee.
 

dudette3993
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
Oh wow. Just oh wow... That was just so utterly... awesome and fluffy and slightly angsty. Loved the island thing, Pirates of the Caribbean w00tw00t! But it was just so sweet, twas absolutely perfect. Something to give myself a boost, lol. Well, great job, love your fics!
Author Feedback: Wah! So glad it gave you that "boost!" We all need a little some-some every once in a while.
 

runningidiot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
Wow. I - I have NO idea what else to say to this, really! When I finished reading, my heart was hammering non-stop as if I was actually in Hermione's positon right there and then!
Nothing's ever made me feel this way before! THANK YOU!
Oh, and GRRRRRREAT job on this fic! Absolutely wonderful!
Author Feedback: That's an uber compliment. Thank you! To feel for Hermione like you did just makes my day!
 

invisible.girl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
Hi!

I'm not really good to write reviews but I can't read another story/chapter from you without saying how I appreciate your writing. I follow all your work in Portkey and love all the stories, the dark and heavy(like Forever Knight, and I 'm telling you, I will cry for hours when I read the latest chapter of that!), and also, more lighted like this story. Actually, I can't even decide which story is my favorite! And obviously, I'm one huge and obsessed fan of Hermione/Harry...

Keep writing always =)
Author Feedback: We're all fans of Hermione and Harry! Which is why I love writing them. ^_^ Forever Knight is soon to come to its end, but H+Hr will stay, eh? So I'll keep writing 'em. Thanks for your kind words. ::hugs::
 

LegalAlien
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
Great chapter!

I really liked your dialoges and the way you've set up the scenery and background.

Please write more soon!
Author Feedback: Ahaha! Writing is no problem! It's getting me to shut up that's the trick. Hehe! Thanks for dropping a line!
 

MarenKPotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
I loved this little one shot. Loved it, loved it, loved it! It was chock full of all the things I love most about Harry and Hermione. I really liked the line you had in there about Harry not losing her just because she'd lost him (even though that's not what really happened, thank goodness). That really sums up their relationship well, I think. No matter what, she'll always be there for him and vice versa. Hope to see more of your work soon!
Author Feedback: Hermione really is a very giving person and Harry's more--well--proactive than most of us give him credit for. Lol! But our dear Hermione... ask for a hand and she'll give you her arm! She's such a lovely character, and she works so well with Harry! Truly, I couldn't write them from the heart if they have to be paired with anyone else!
 

Julie3291
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
That was a great little one shot. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
Author Feedback: Thanks! ^_^
 

rainbow star
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
OoOoOo this was beautiful!!!! I loved it!!! How Hermione said that she and her mother were fools to Harry Potter and Harry with a wink her and a smile there….! That cracked me I was laughing so hard!!! This was great!!!! When they finally kiss and the happy hour begins...two drinks for the price of one! It was very realistic and cute!! I enjoyed it very much!!! It was a nice gateway from all the drama and NO sun that Forever Knight has! Hahahaha although I still love it!! I’m a sucker for Drama!!!! I’m sure you enjoyed writing all that about the sun and how Hermione was sunbathed!!!

Seeyou soon!!!
Author Feedback: "Island Girl" was definitely a breath of fresh air! A most welcome break from the drama. Haha! Thank Tome Raider. She inspired it. ^_^

But now "Island Girl" is done, so back got DRAMA! LOL!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
this was amazing! I really loved it! I love all of your stories! you're an amazing writer!
Author Feedback: Thankee.
 

Cokieisme
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
Oh yeah. That was real nice. It made me want to be by the beach and I don't even like the ocean! (more of a lake and creek girl) I like how you used a lot of the scenery in the story. And of course how Harry came to find her! Thats always good. I have to admit, I think I would leave for a while too, if I thought what she did. Thanks for letting me read it!
Author Feedback: Indeed, Hermione is so intelligent, books and cleverness and all that, but then one couldn't read about how to handle love and fix heartbreak, so I figured her "logical" solution would be to "get away." Hope I got that right! But I'm just glad it seemed to work for the story. Hehe. Thanks!
 

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