Very cute. I loved it! Great job on the writing and all!

I like how it all played out, funny how her mum caved so quickly.

The melody of steel drums, clinking glass, and singing voices faded into the background. Hermione’s thoughts scattered like sand caught in the swirling current of Harry’s kiss. There were no oceans between them anymore, just that touch of breeze on her back and shoulders, the soft and hard feel of him as his hands shifted the straps of her dress aside, and the warmth of the late island sun on her tanned-golden skin as he lifted her, her legs wrapped around him, and brought her back into her plush tropical-themed room.


what a brilliant way to finish, truly perfection!

This story was absolutely beautiful! I got all chocked up when Harry appeared and they started talking. I don't know why, but the way you wrote hermione's pain really touched me. Of course the happy ending is welcome too. Eh eh. Thanks for sharing! Great job!!!

~ Tanja ~

Without really meaning to compare, I revisit this fic after every two dozen short fluffy fanfics I read.

There is such a ring of authenticity to the HHr interaction here and the dialogue is just so honest as to make this quite possibly the most romantic HHr piece in PK.

It gets better with evey rereading.

Wonderful! I got wind of your stories in the Paradigm of Uncertainty group and I am glad I clicked the link

For not being beta-ed, your story is very clean.

I'll make some time to read through your chaptered fics.

Cheers!

Rosali

This was so good. I really loved it. Am still loving it. I'm writing the sequel in my head....

PS- Harry's totally sexy.

Nice one-shot - made me think that I was really in the tropics. I will keep reading your stories! Harmony forever!

I love the way you write, the dialogue is so real and the imagery is really effortless, descriptive without being too wordy. I wish I could write as well as u!

I'm so glad you've got heaps of stories here for me to read - I first read Finding Jane and now I've got all these others ahead of me!

Loved the island theme, made me want to go on holiday

This was a wonderful story. I loved that Harry stooped to a little B&E to get to his girl.

Nice Shot! i really liked it... I've reading your other story (forever knight) and it's really good too, i've never seen Buffy, but i think i'm going to do it now, just for your story

Wonderful story! I enjoyed your story so much.
Thank you for writing, and please go on!

Oh, I liked this one shot very much... I could really feel the tropical theme, hehe... very nice story, I love the coquettish Harry and everything, he's so cute! lol and I'm glad they made up, and that he left Ginny behind, I really don't understand why in real life (fans and all) think that he's going back with her after the voldemort thing, it's preposterous! Anyways, loved it! Nice job!

Loved the idea of Hermione need to get away after the war. Excellent

I read this a long time ago, and it was nice to come back to something so squee-inducing. I'm feeling the warm fuzzies.