spaz141Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/05/07
that was kinda cool.
because I had a certain amount of warning, I think I followed correctly.
your brilliance has no bounds! |
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FrostyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/06
Had to read it twice to understand it. I must have skipped over, or not paid attention to the line 'It was only in the last nanosecond of his life that he realized that he'd been deceived and those realities had not existed' the first time. Great story... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/06
Strange but it made since! And yes you were right I was utterly CONFUSED!!! |
Author Feedback: lol Sorry! It's one of those things I wish I could film just because words sometimes fail.  |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/06
Now yes, this was a *weird* fic. I thought maybe you were going through a time-turner...but if I understand it correctly, it was a spell that they did & they went through different "realities" that could have been. *G*
Lisa |
Author Feedback: lol I know, it was a bit odd. 
It was a spell, but they didn't go through different realities. Just distracted Voldemort to "infect" him.  |
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EDrrrrmmm....okay, I re-read and re-read and re-read a couple of thousand times and...I think I get it. They won, right? And the first couple of paragraphs were....not real, right? And.......they won? Haha, well, it's well-written, no matter. Who cares about the plot? Haha, no, just kidding. The plot matters. And if what I assumed what the plot, then it's incredible. If not, then...I'll re-read and get back to you. |
Author Feedback: LOL I loved your review, I thought I should let you know.
I totally needed that chuckle, thanks. 
And you are completely right. |
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Sort of confused :O. My first thought after this was "huh?", my second thought was "eh?", then I thought I kind of got it - but then I confused myself again . So they're in comas but they're not really? I got the idea that they were in their little universe beating up on Voldie while they were in their comas or something like that, lol. Confusing, but I like it! |
Author Feedback: lol Thanks!
But no, they're not in comas. They were really fighting Voldemort. I explain more in my review reply to usha88. |
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He-he pretty confusing fic but amazingly i kinda like it |
Author Feedback: lol Thanks.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/06
I was super confused, but the more I think about it, I think that I understand what happened. I think that they probably were comatose for a year, but that huge blast forced Voldie to die...I think...I hope.
Well...great job on it. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I'm sorry for the confusion! Actually, Harry, Hermione and Ron were sending Voldemort visions of his victory to get inside his brain while they infected him with love. He was seeing what he wanted to see and while he was distracted with his "victory" they killed him with love. Er, did that make sense?  |
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JaeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/06
That was actually kinda cool if you read it really closely. I enjoyed it very much.
Not terribly angsty. I personally like a good happy ending, so no worries there. I think this is how the story of HP should end. Much more interesting and terribly intriguing to read many times.
much love, jae |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I like a happy ending too. Or at least a good ending. I'm really really glad you liked it! I was a bit worried that it might be a bit too out there or too confusing because while I know what's going on, I don't know if the audience knows what's going on and I'm never sure if I conveyed what I wanted to say clearly enough.
I originally wanted to classify this as Angst/Humor, but one my betas, the wonderful hal, suggested Drama/Angst. |
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