thou this story was a little too twisted for my...i started to like it.
hope u didn`t got stuck.

Great story, and could find nothing to critisize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

Sorry but it seems that Harry doesn't love Hermione. And it'd hard to read it. It's obvious that the only one he cares is Grace- and Hermione looks like to making fool of herself. I can't see the HHr in this story. Sorry, but a few snogs doesn't mean love.

A very interesting story. The mana angle is definitely a good twist. hope to see the next update soon!

good, a few errors in the text made some parts difficult to read through but not everyone can make everything run through perfectly, i'd suggest a beta if you haven't gotten one, but this story it self is pretty good

I love this story more and more with each update. I can't wait for the next update to see what will happen.

well i've finished all of what you've written and i must say i enjoy how u took the story from where it started ot where it is. its very good i hope to see a new chapter soon

another great chapter to a surprisingly good story, i never really thought i would enjoy a story based on the concept of jumping back in time, as harry did to get to this point, as much as i have this fic. keep up the wonderful work

how do you do it? i mean this chapter seemed so packed with information. its spectacular

again as i posted in my first review this is not my normal type of fic but i must say it is extremely well written, some people can pull it off and make it seem like a fantastic story and if the first 2 chapters are a testiment you so far have proven to be one of those few

well this is certainly a story that i don't normally bend to but its well written and this first chapter has peeked my curiosity

Just found this story today. Writing style is a bit different, but it fits the mood of the story perfectly. Character has been outstanding yet confusing. (Talk about your mood swings! Yikes!)

Anyhow, can't wait to see more.

Best regards and post again soon!
-- Shaz

Don't worry. life comes from time to time. =) this chap was interesting. liked it bc it got more into what they thought. i think the first part was the best.

Meh, it didn't show my coding...

Lemme try that again ignor
Just substitute the stars * for arrows
*font color="red"*Words here*/font*

Or, if you have a specific color in mind that has a long or distorted name, you can use hex code in substitute for the name of the color. So, instead of typing red, you'd type #FF0000

*font color="#FF0000"*Words here*/font*

I'm not 100% positive that normal html color coding works on this site but you can try.

You enter an html opening like so, following by the color of choice in quotes. Be sure to finish out the color part with a closing.
Making the text color red

You can also use hex digits (These ones equal red) You can find a complete list on the web using google.
Making the text color red

If you have Microsoft Word you can simply paste a chapter into a Word Document and then use the color feature (Alot easier). Just copy and past what you have written and convert it to a Word Document to HTML converter on this site (Fanfiction.com also has a good one).

Hope that helps.