This is a brilliant thought provoking and fantastically original piece of fanfiction ! If you complete this story it will undoubtly be an award winnig effort. Bravo ! Please find the time and desire to complete this wonderful tale.

The soul fragments are called horcruxes, not horocruxes. Great story. Love it!

Great story, and could find nothing to critisize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

Great story, and could find nothing to critisize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

Dude - you SERIOUSLY need a beta. Your story concept is good but sometimes its hard to understand what you are trying to say. I don't mean this as a flame but I'm telling you, it's not grammar and spelling - it's typing! You need to proofread what you type and correct the many mistyped words.

This story has many more typos than your others - what's up with that. The story is good but hard to read. Is English your first language?

I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work!

Great chapter. I can't wait for Harry's explanation of what happened. I really enjoyed the last two lines of this chapter. Ron falling and hitting his head and Harry only caring about Hermione was perfect!

Keep up the good work.

I can't wait for the next update! This chapter was really, really good!

great job, i think you deserve a cookie. cant wait to see another chapter.

aww, so harry really is a 70 year old man. that seems to kind of screw up the possibility for a relationship with hermione. would love to see how you fix that.

wow you should just call him tom bombidil with the singing h dose. i am still confused about how fwakes/death/harry/death camp survivor are tied in so i guess i will just have to read on.

I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work! Jimmy

I can't remember as it has been a while since I read the first version of this story, but I don't think the wedding was there as much, but I can't remember. It could all be the same - however, I still enjoy it the second time around. I've always been impressed by how your stories can dig right to the heart of the matter or the issue. I don't know why, but this quote “Delusions are just dreams you've not given any hope to.” really struck me the most. I loved Death and Dumbledore and I look forward to the crew being taken down a few pegs. Excellent job, as always.

Wow! Good ideas but poorly written. You need a Beta! I'm sorry but I just can't seem to wrap my mind around Harry on a horse...Been watching too many Clint Eastwood movies...

Well written with a fantastic plot behind it...
Can't wait for the next chapters